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for With A Kiss

by ashpik1

person ferlerrr
schedule July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's so...sad. However, the writing is beautiful. I feel Ichigo's sadness. I feel he loves Urahara and I think he loves Ichigo, but there is something that keeps him away from the boy. Or I want to believe it... So, I think a next chapter to ease my heart -ache for them. Good writing, I love it.
person jess
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very hot... and a little meloncholy... but i really like it! thank you so much! *HUG*
person Pickles
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, this is great! Just like all your other stories~! x3
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow smut pure and simple haha love your writing.