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March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yippee! Steadier arrival of stories, or so I hope. Small grammatical suggestion, it's all of A sudden. Other than that, nothing but heartfelt praise and hope for more stories in the future. JHH
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March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!
They story is really coming along nice and the wait was well worth it!!
I'll try to catch you on MSN some time or I'll email ya.
Keep up the good work!!!
They story is really coming along nice and the wait was well worth it!!
I'll try to catch you on MSN some time or I'll email ya.
Keep up the good work!!!
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March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just fond your story and I all ready read it all the way throw from What The Eyes Can't See to A new Window and i must say it one of my fav storys on AFF I hope you keep writing and I can't wait for the next chapter.
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February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please! Please update soon! I cant wait to find out what happens next! I love this story, and Kin and Kaien are so cute! And Hot TOO! Wanna read more with Souken and Asuka too! Please write more like....NOW!!!!!
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February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story and pray to whatever higher being that you keep writing, I have seen far to many great stories fall by the wayside due to lack of interest and it saddens me. But i do agree with a previous reviewer posting on Fanfiction.net would, I believe, drastically increase your reader base and expose your work to a wider variety of people where it can be better appreciated.
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February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just finished 15! Great writing, as always. I know Nnoitra is a total ass in the manga, but have you seen Santa Teresa? He's a praying mantis. Badass. Just throwing it out there, Kira/Hinamori. I think it'd work, they're both kind of twitchy. Keep up the good work. JHH
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February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Happy, happy, happy =D Finally after that long wait.
"What The Eyes Can't See" and "A New Window" just proves how much your a story telling master - or God, which ever one prefer to uses.
Sorry I've neglected to review every single chapter - was bit on the busy side, school sucks doesn't it?
Now, I've always been more of an IchiHime fan but the way you write your stories it kinda made be turn topsy turvy and ended up as a Ichigo + Tatsuki fan!
This chapter was really good (maybe it was because I missed it D=) for a moment I absolutely forgot where they were when it got to the part of Toshiro and Rangiku. I thought everyone went to Soul Society for a trip at that moment XD Don't know what gave me that thought.
I liked the bit about Toshiro and Rangiku gives a bit more thoughts on them in your story. Never thought about Toshiro being a dad really - after all he did look like a Elementry Schooler to begin with =p
"What The Eyes Can't See" and "A New Window" just proves how much your a story telling master - or God, which ever one prefer to uses.
Sorry I've neglected to review every single chapter - was bit on the busy side, school sucks doesn't it?
Now, I've always been more of an IchiHime fan but the way you write your stories it kinda made be turn topsy turvy and ended up as a Ichigo + Tatsuki fan!
This chapter was really good (maybe it was because I missed it D=) for a moment I absolutely forgot where they were when it got to the part of Toshiro and Rangiku. I thought everyone went to Soul Society for a trip at that moment XD Don't know what gave me that thought.
I liked the bit about Toshiro and Rangiku gives a bit more thoughts on them in your story. Never thought about Toshiro being a dad really - after all he did look like a Elementry Schooler to begin with =p
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February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heh, I might take you up on that offer.
I'm so excited for this update! I admit, this is the story that has me dropping in at least twice a week here (since I'm actually not a big fan of this site), just to see if there's a new chapter. And to be honest, the reason why you've probably lost some readers is the long wait. Out of sight, out of mind, you know? It's not like ff.net, where you can receive a notice on updates...have you thought about posting there? I think your reader base would shoot way up if you posted there...
Anyway, OF COURSE I'd review! I have a proprietary interest in this story, since I was the one that requested it! Kin and Kaien are so wonderful together, it's a little sickening XD And I really loved the HitsuMatsu that you put here; they're probably my second favorite Bleach pairing, after Shunsui and Nanao. I completely agree that a HitsuMatsu daughter would act like Matsumoto, and the son like Hitsugaya. Just imagine the family dinners! You definitely did the pair justice, so I thank you for that. But my favorite part by far was Byakuya's interactions with his niece and nephew...I always thought that Byakuya would be a sucker for kids. And the fact that Masaki has a crush on him is just delicious - I can't wait to see what you do with that.
Wow, what a long review! Just goes to show that I missed this story ^_^
I'm so excited for this update! I admit, this is the story that has me dropping in at least twice a week here (since I'm actually not a big fan of this site), just to see if there's a new chapter. And to be honest, the reason why you've probably lost some readers is the long wait. Out of sight, out of mind, you know? It's not like ff.net, where you can receive a notice on updates...have you thought about posting there? I think your reader base would shoot way up if you posted there...
Anyway, OF COURSE I'd review! I have a proprietary interest in this story, since I was the one that requested it! Kin and Kaien are so wonderful together, it's a little sickening XD And I really loved the HitsuMatsu that you put here; they're probably my second favorite Bleach pairing, after Shunsui and Nanao. I completely agree that a HitsuMatsu daughter would act like Matsumoto, and the son like Hitsugaya. Just imagine the family dinners! You definitely did the pair justice, so I thank you for that. But my favorite part by far was Byakuya's interactions with his niece and nephew...I always thought that Byakuya would be a sucker for kids. And the fact that Masaki has a crush on him is just delicious - I can't wait to see what you do with that.
Wow, what a long review! Just goes to show that I missed this story ^_^
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
After a long wait, we finally get to see what happens on Christmas morning.
This particular chapter really reminded me of some of the Ichigo/Tatsuki interactions in "What the Eye's can't see" (which isn't a bad thing, I LOVE that story). I like how they have seemed to settled into "real life" more, and it makes the story seem all the more real.
It was also nice to see more of the Toshiro/Rangiku story, especially their kids and how that will play into the stories of the others.
Personally, I'd like to see more Ichigo/Tatsuki stuff, but since this is a story focusing on their kids its alright if they are left in the background, but my fanboyism wouldn't permit me not to ask.
Once again, a great chapter and I can't wait for the next one.
This particular chapter really reminded me of some of the Ichigo/Tatsuki interactions in "What the Eye's can't see" (which isn't a bad thing, I LOVE that story). I like how they have seemed to settled into "real life" more, and it makes the story seem all the more real.
It was also nice to see more of the Toshiro/Rangiku story, especially their kids and how that will play into the stories of the others.
Personally, I'd like to see more Ichigo/Tatsuki stuff, but since this is a story focusing on their kids its alright if they are left in the background, but my fanboyism wouldn't permit me not to ask.
Once again, a great chapter and I can't wait for the next one.
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January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A great swquel to ur story.. It was very new with the future of Ichigo and Tatsuki.. I had a feeling you would put Yoruichi's daughter and Ichigo's son together... But in a way it seems Kaien is Kaien from the beginning of Rukia's soul academy but how come... Other than the twists and drops you put everyone through great job...