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Now, now we had some good times but where I live and attend college now, I am no longer able to access this site (and you should see the stuff that sneaks around the firewall) so I can't review as much as I would like, I don't have time or access, I barely got these chapters read and I'm sorry sweetie but it's either you or my career XD Good work on the chapter although I feel that it must be a bit difficult to balance so many characters. Once this series is complete maybe you should try starting from the beginning with a clean slate again for a fresh challenge (ah, it'll be so long until I see the Kurotsuchi's ass-kicking :'( ) Alas, and take care <3

Yay! My feedback got feedback! I'm glad new chapters are starting to come in cause I just finished reading What The Eyes Can't See for a third time. I'm still holding out hope for Stark, though. I mean when Aaroniero got killed, Stark knew but chose to do nothing, whereas a true fanatic, Zommari, rushed to deal with his fellow Espada's murderer. I'm pulling for my aniki's lookalike! And hopefully you rejoiced as well as to what happened to Szayel Aporro. I think he'll be having an interesting century! Final note, it's all of a sudden, not the sudden. Just making sure you knew. Revolution.

It's no problem! When I truly enjoy reading a story, it's no trouble to review.

I find the tension between Soul Society and Hueco Mundo extremely interesting. Of course, it would be entirely unrealistic for everything to be coming up roses between them, considering the fact that shinigami and hollows are always going to be on opposite sides. The dynamic between the two as you've portrayed it is very, very good, though I definitely think that the captains that are present at the Kurosaki's Christmas can be counted on to look past the Hollow aspects of various characters - so I'm glad that things turned out well. Argh, does that make sense? I seem to have trouble articulating today ^_^ Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Still waiting for new chapters, but I just remembered something! If Chad and Halibel have another son, you could name him Oscar, after Sado's abuelo. Second if Uryu and Orihime have another son, you could name him Sora, after Orihime's brother. Just pitching ideas to keep with the whole naming scheme. Hope you consider it.

Platinumsabr, you are the only author on AFF.net whose stories I wait for. Your choice of character pairings is splendid, personally I'd like to see more Ulquiorra/Karin, and Ichigo/Tatsuki as the backbone of your story is brilliant. I will continue with the positive feedback until the story continues! On second thought, I won't stop there, either! Merci beaucoup, vous etes une artiste.

I am astonished by your literary skill. I love your stories, particularly "A New Window" and "What The Eyes Can't See". Your stories can be characterized by two main traits, a lack of speliing or grammatical errors, a sad commonality amongst other stories, and excellent plot lines with deep characters, not caricatures, people with real strengths and weaknesses, not a mishmash of regurgitated rhetoric. I created an account to express my graciousness for your stories. I tip my hat to you, sir.

I am truly glad that your hiatus from writing was not permanent, as this story is fantastic. I wait with bated breath for your next entries.

P.S. Is Stark assumed to have died in your stories, cause I liked him in the manga.

P.P.S. Have you been keeping up with the manga? I was sad when Szayellaporro went Alien on Nemu and killed her... I hope Mayuri makes a new Nemu... I'm sad now... {:(

Just now found your story and read it in its entirety. It's rare that I find a story that I enjoy as much as this, especially since I usually abhor anything other than Ichigo/Orihime, Rukia/Renji, etc. The canon characters' relationships are pretty believable overall, though I have to admit, Chizuru winding up with ANY guy is pretty far-fetched without some form of back story to explain how it came to be. What really surprised me was how much I liked the new characters. The way Kaien dealt with his emotions by training relentlessly, and the way Kin just tried to avoid hers, reflected their parents rather well. And even though I thought Asuka got over Kaien a little too fast, I kept finding myself going back to chapter five and rereading her scene with Souken. Also, I liked how there was a fair amount of angst in some of the earlier chapters, but it never got soul-crushingly depressing. Anyways, great story so far. I'll be sure to read the next chapter as soon as it comes out. Thanks for a great story.

AHHHHHHH I'm so happy! I've been waiting so long for updates, and there are six new chapters! Don't worry, I'll be happy to review them all. Kin's frustration is so cute and sweet. The idea of a scarf made from Kaien's hair is interesting, but a little creepy, I have to admit! Although we make scarves from wool and angora, so why not. I loved the idea of a Soul Society baby boom! Especially HitsuMatsu and ShunsuiNanao, I love those two. Well, onwards!

I'm so impressed with your characterization - you must have pages and pages of notes on personalities and abilities - and they're all so creative! It was great to learn about Tsukiyomi and Masaki's powers, and I liked seeing that Kaien does have a weakness. And Tatsuki's pregnancy is a nice ending for the chapter!