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December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Souken's power is terrifying! There's only one thing to say about Grimmjow and Asuka's little situation: awkward! But I love Souken and Asuka; they're probably my favorite of your OCs.
And yay, finally some Ulquiorra/Karin! I would have liked more background on them, but perhaps that's another chapter?
And one more thing: I said this during What The Eyes Can't See, but I have to say it again: you write beautiful love scenes. They're passionate and well, hot, but they're also quite beautiful and emotional. Great job!
And yay, finally some Ulquiorra/Karin! I would have liked more background on them, but perhaps that's another chapter?
And one more thing: I said this during What The Eyes Can't See, but I have to say it again: you write beautiful love scenes. They're passionate and well, hot, but they're also quite beautiful and emotional. Great job!
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December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6: Nice work, it'll be interesting to see how the pregnancy goes, and your characters always love to torture each other, it'll be interesting to see when they finally snap.
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December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How interesting, the whole menstruation-aphrodesiac thing. I felt badly for Kaien - it must be terrifying to lose control to the Hollow because of the way his powers have been fused, and to know that someone he loves could be hurt. But Kin's reaction was spot-on, I think. She loves him despite everything, and trusts him to keep control. Great job!
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December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heh heh, Kaien's display of male possessiveness was amusing, as well as the appearance of Souken and Asuka and their interaction with Ms. Ochi. I'm intrigued with Nemu and Hanataro's situation!
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December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was an EXCELLENT battle scene, I'm so happy! You really do have such a talen for writing fight scenes and this definitely was the best you've done so far! All of the different fighting styles are so very cool. I can't wait for the next update!
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December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First of all, I want to tell you something. I created an account on this site just to review your story, I liked it that much.
Ichigo/Tatsuki is my personal favorite pairing, and I am glad you went with it. I also am really enjoying how you have written their kids. It took my a while to wrap my head around Shinigami/Human pairing with Arrancar, but you make it work.
I can't wait for more chapters, and have a Merry Christmas!!
Cheers,
xSTALKERx
Ichigo/Tatsuki is my personal favorite pairing, and I am glad you went with it. I also am really enjoying how you have written their kids. It took my a while to wrap my head around Shinigami/Human pairing with Arrancar, but you make it work.
I can't wait for more chapters, and have a Merry Christmas!!
Cheers,
xSTALKERx
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December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved the character development of the sisters, and there is always something ominous lurking in the background of your stories, looking forward to seeing how this one plays out!
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December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch 8: A nice little side story, with an update on Karin to boot, very nice. Its good to see that everything is going so well for the characters. I really like how every1 has developed, you seem to be a master of character development, i just can't seem to harp on that enough!
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December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9: Interesting chapter, wow, that just played out really well. I don't think that could have gone any better, it was very coherent, readable, and enjoyable. Keep up the good work, i can't wait to see how this plays out now more than ever
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December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
turbulence ahead... can't wait to see just what could possibly present a threat to these entities!