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by Platinumsabr

person AceKent
schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice fight scene, i really got into it! looking forward to the next chapter!
person eva24
schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's been along time, and things have changed between us *sob* It's not you, it's me (ROFL) but regardless I simply do not have the time for your request (nor the patience for that matter XD) So I'll simply say, Hooray, good job and glad to see that it's as fun as always, Merry Christmas indeed :D
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good Hun. You're doing quite well with this one and I can't wait to find out what happens. *chuckle* You now have my attention and your review.
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is *very* good. Like you'd mentioned previously, people find it hard to take to OCs. However, you've done an amazing job of integrating them into the world you've developed, and an even better job humanizing them.

I'm certainly bookmarking this thread!
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please please please continue this story!!! I already like it, and I loved What The Eyes Can't See, so I have high expectations for it's continuation.

--Radgar
person Tehmk
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Story is actually quite interesting, probably due to your creativity. ;) Keep it going!
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:D Yay! ther finally together!
Ur storys keep gettin better and better keep up the good work, I luv it!
person AceKent
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That is a rather interesting ability, it reminds me of Archer's Unlimited Blade Works: Infinite Creation of Swords from Fate/Stay Night. I liked the last three chapters, but I was a little concerned last chapter because I kinda felt that Kaien was acting a little more like a Super Saiyan than a Shinigami. But my fears were misplaced I am sorry I ever doubted you, I love your stories and I check fairly often for new updates. Keep up the good work.
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha yay, all's resolved with Kin and Kaien. I really must applaud you on your ability to come up with different fighting styles and techniques - they're very different and very unique. I for one, wouldn't have thought of making someone into a zanpakuto's spirit. I can't wait to see more of Kaien's abilities...and Kin's too! And I loved the Asuka/Souken bit at the end. I'm so happy that you've decided to continue, and I can't wait for the next chapter.
person Orzhova
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Though I am sad that this could possibly be your last update for a while, I am glad that your passion for it has not diminished. :)