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MORE!!!!!!!! MORE CHAPTERS!!!! WRITE MORE!!!

omg, this story is awsome, keep the chapters rolling, I loved "What the eyes can't see", so cool and well done, and it was refreshing reading a pairing that there really isn't enough of on here. So keep the chapters rolling, I hope Asuka doesn't kill her and vice versa, sad really, its too bad that she can't be with him, maybe you should write a seperate story or oneshot with an Asuka Kaien pairing

More! Please more! I gotta say it twice, 'cause I missed reviewing during the interlude, so here we go again: More please please please! I heart Asuka almost as much as her daddeh, and that's sayin' something! I swear, this is just as good as the first, if not better! I may begin worshiping you... >.>

HELL YES you should continue this! It's true that many people have a hard time getting to like OCs, but hopefully those who've read the previous story will want to keep going. I know I do - I check every day on here to see if you've updated. It's going along so well that it would be such a disappointment if you've stopped. I for one, would be very disappointed.

Poor Kin and Kaien! So many misunderstandings...I hope they can get over that hurdle soon. I'm intruiged by Asuka, I must confess...are you planning on doing anything with her? I hope so, because true to form, I'm always more interested in the side characters than I am the main ones...don't ask me why! I still love Kin and Kaien though (can't wait to see them battle!), and I can't wait to see what kind of power Kaien has.

I'm really sorry to confess that I'm one of the greedy people that read your story and then neglect to review and congratulate you on a fine piece of work. Personally, I love literally everything about this story and its predecessor. I think that it would be a great loss to this site and it's members if you decided to discontinue this story. You've crafted something really unique and enjoyable to read.

Luv the new chapter so much! All I could think of was OMFG at the end.
Story is so awsum and I cant wait for Kaen to get laid! XD

Woah! *blinks* That was a fast update..............Oh yeah, sorry for assuming you were a girl *giggles* So from now on I shall be sure to refer to you as a fan-boy XD
Great update BTW, Grimm/Chizuru is love. <3 I'm all excited about updates now............again ^__^
SSince you were so kind to share, I should return the courtesy plus I feel doubted......I'm 21 and why yes, I am a girl XD *fangirls on to the next chapter* ;)

Gotta love the crack ^_^ Nicely done PWP, although I'd definitely like to see more of Grimmjow and Chizuru's everyday (not that they wouldn't have sex everyday, but you know what I mean!) life. Will they have roles later on?

Oh, and thanks for clearing that up. I was very confused as well. :)

Ah, I'm so ecstatic to see an update! I've been waiting for so long, and I definitely wasn't disappointed! I'm so curious to see what Nejibana's role is in this, and all of Kaien's powers. The idea of (most) of the gang and their children in Hueco Mundo...is pure chaos. I feel sorry for the arrancar, hahaha. Poor Kin and Kaien...I really hope Kin doesn't turn into mini Soi Fong, but if Yoruichi has anything to say about it, it's not going to happen! Well, I can't wait for the next chapter!

can you say reincarnation? Please, Please say reincarnation! It's Nejibana fer chrissakes. There's got to be some sort of link there