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Just finished re-reading 29 and still the best chapter ever. EVER!

True, the emotional stuff isn't my cup of tea, but it was an excellent epi-epi-epilogue! Just remember that I'll be expecting some real violence one of the days!

Just read 29 again. Awesome. I suppose it was a good idea when I brought up Orihime's brother's name all those months ago. And I suppose the emotional stuff was touching and whatnot. Hell, it was probably better than fistfights. But don't push that probably, fella.

very good, good plot great character development. would like more about the ran/histgaya pairing. it wasn't very well explained. neither was ken/kiku (probably not abbreviated right) some side storys to what the eyes can't see and a new window would be good. it would make some of the pairngs more understandilbe and close time gaps.

Tsuki, one of my favorite characters. She's got the looks (chicks with white/silvery hair... OMFG, ranks just below redheads on my list), she's got the personality (so much like Tatsuki...), hell... she's got it all. Originally I didn't really connect with Sora's character, but with the developments in later chapters and this epilogue I finally see him as a full fledged and fleshed out character and he fits Tsuki perfectly.

As usual, the writing in this chapter was top notch and really drew the reader into the story. It's very descriptive and you don't want to stop reading. Personally, I'd have to say it is one of my favorite chapters in ANW.

As for another short chapter to wrap things all up, you know I'd enjoy that. Perhaps something set 10 years past Senna's birth that kinda wraps everyone's stories up (Ichigo/Tatsuk, Senna, Kaien/Kin, Tsuki/Sora, Masaki/Byakuya, with mentions of Inoue/Ishida, Chad/Haibel, and the others)

Whatever you feel is necessary, I'm sure it'll be awesome and we'll enjoy it.

Until then...

Sweet is definitely a good thing, believe me! I cannot tell you how happy I am with this story, it's progressed farther than I ever could have dreamed when I requested that you do a sequel. All I can say is thank you!

SORRY for being vague last time. I really wanted to say I enjoyed the chapter, but didn't have many word on it. And because I know you (because I know writers) would rather a review about how I felt on the chapter as oppose to 'Please update soon', which is how I always feel when I read a good story, I don't review nearly enough for a story as good as yours and for that I'm sorry too. Anywho, FAVORITE CHAPTER, hand's down!! Not to say I don't love the rest (I adore Kin, she reminds me of one of my best friends and Kaien is HOT!) It ranks right above Soken's chapter. (I LOVE the Ishida children... Must be the glasses. lol) I just love Tsuki more,and Sora's so sweet, in the earlier chapter's I got the feel he was a little of an outcast in his own family (I know what that looks like). I was so excited when I seen the new chapter so earlier than I expected, I check on a whim. I did a happy dance all around my laptop, before I could calm down enough to finish reading this chapter. But I'm sooooo sad that it's all ending, but all good things must or they lose their luster. Ah, but hope peaks through the clouds in the form of your new 'planned' fic. I rejoice. I've gotten fond of Soi-Fong while reading 'For Love of a Friend' and I'm eager to see another version of her. And I really hope you do it on canon with this fic, I'd love to see the whole gang return, even if it's only in the background. I wanna see Senna older and if Tatsuki was able to keep Kenpachi's son way. I HOPE NOT!! And I keep wonder what tint the hair of the Tsuki/Sora children will be. Isn't that random? lol :} I hope to see the next epilogue soon.

P.S. This might very well be the second longest review I've every written.

-Sheastar

AWWWWW!!! He's happy! Wow. I'm grinning so hard! lol. I'm ready for Tsuki's ending. (She's my favorite. :>) And any thing you wish to continue I promise to read!!

Well, damn. I managed, to my great shame, to completely fail on following up and even (!) keeping up with new chapters for most of the summer. And now that I've been on study abroad in Budapest for a few weeks, I finally get my head working right again...On the other hand, I've had a great excuse to reread both What The Eyes Can't See and this (again, since they're awesome). I felt really bad that I never got around to reviewing more, since I think I said I would, but now that there's more new chapters to read I think I'll be able to make up for it or something. =P

I totally believe he has those feelings as well. I cannot wait for another one to come. I love this series and hope it continues!

Feedback on the story before: It's good and I want to see it come out~