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schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
all i can say about this latest chapter is wow. i can totally see him acting that way, assuming a 20 year thaw and all.
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a bit... different. It takes a bit of mental rearranging to wrap your head around this pairing, but when you really think about it it works. Masaki is grown up and when you are dealing with soul's age just isn't a factor once they get past a certain point. Love knows no bounds, as they say.

You really captured everyone's favorite block of ice's emotions very well and really showed the struggle going on inside of him. The way you described Masaki's grown up form, damn... no mortal (or immortal) man could say no to that!!

The one thing I was disappointed in was the fact we didn't get to see how Ichigo, Tatsuki, Tsuki, Rukia and the rest of the family reacted to their relationship. You made a subtle reference to it causing a "huge shock" and left the rest of it up to our imaginations but I would have like to see how you, as master of this universe, portrayed it.

I eagerly await the next epilogue!!! Tsuki is one of my other favorite characters (so much like her mother!) so I look forward to that a lot.
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schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Byakuya with kids ...... what a ....... strange thought ........... *Pictures stoic Kuchiki surrounded by laughing, playing children (all his own) complete with long-suffering expression, and falls to floor* ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL!!!!!!!
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to add this to my review...

Byakuya is one lucky bastard, he can have a threesome without ever worrying about being unfaithful since his wife is basically two people, but those two people are the same. Its confusing, but awesome. Besides, call me crazy but I imagine the pale skinned, white haired hollow version of her is pretty damn hot.
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww! This chapter provoked a lot of hand-fluttering. I was hoping you'd get around to Bya-kun and Masaki, and you definitely didn't disappoint. You've certainly driven to the heart of Kuchiki Byakuya, and his love story with her was just incredibly...sweet. Yay.
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great third epilogue! Touching and whatnot. Keep up the good work!
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great conclusion! Nice Memories of Nobody curveball, too. Personally I kind of like the lieutenant in the, "Oh, what a jackass," sense. Besides, it's always funny when Soi Fong threatens him. It's a good contrast. You know, the no-nonsense commando, and the totally out-of-place moron.
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the e-mail, I really appreciated it! It was nice to see this end (is this the end?) with Ichigo and Tatsuki...full circle, you know? I loved the implications of the end though...a "reincarnated" Senna (what a creative way to put her back in the story!) and KuuKen's boy...now that is interesting. Anyway, you know how I stand on the Soi Fong story so...have at it!
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
All I will say is WOW.

For an insane Ichigo/Tatsuki nut like me this is like the holy grail. I look forward to the other epilogues.

You do know now that we must beg you for at least a oneshot of a more grown up Senna/KuuKen's son..........:p

Even though our MSN convo got cut short, you should know my thoughts on the Soi fic.
schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw, thanks for the plug! And I have absolutely no problem with you using bachata in this chapter...it's just spreading the joy of dancing, as far as I'm concerned!

I was happy to see an update! Yay for weddings! Loved the battle scene - but then, you know how I feel about a good battle scene! Great job as usual!

And I guess if anyone is interested in fluff, ballroom dancing, and Bleach, (and actually came to look for my review here) my pen name on ff.net is Philyra.