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June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! All the romance, and fear, and dramatic moments. Its one of the best future fics Ive read. More lemony goodness and romance please. I love all the moments with Kin and Kaien.
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June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So there I was, a chronic lurker, looking for something to get my mind off that nasty math exam tomorrow morning. I was overjoyed to see an update on this, and at first, it was doing exactly what I was hoping for. A few minutes later I'm seriously worried that worked too well, and registering just to review and say *something* because this story once again reached a new level of awesome. I'm not sure any other story has made me so...worried about the characters like this. In hindsight, maybe not the best thing to be doing before an exam. Would I do it again? Hell yes. I may review more after the exams tomorrow, but I had to at last say something, even if it now sounds like me rambling a bit.
Oh, and as an aside, I gotta say that I like the way you've written Mayuri. Admittedly, I've always viewed him as a very amoral, inhumane character, but not an *evil* one. I kinda doubt he'd have the motivation to rule the worlds or generally be a true villain, but that's just the way I like to think of him. Whether it was intentional or not, I can still see that in the way you've portrayed him here. That's not to say I would mind whatever direction this story goes. I doubt anything would make me stop reading (or re-reading!) at this point.
Oh, and as an aside, I gotta say that I like the way you've written Mayuri. Admittedly, I've always viewed him as a very amoral, inhumane character, but not an *evil* one. I kinda doubt he'd have the motivation to rule the worlds or generally be a true villain, but that's just the way I like to think of him. Whether it was intentional or not, I can still see that in the way you've portrayed him here. That's not to say I would mind whatever direction this story goes. I doubt anything would make me stop reading (or re-reading!) at this point.
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June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
All in all, I'm entranced by your story, and it's gracious and almost organic take on the universe. I love how the characters manage to stay so... basically even the new characters are so very alive, and work so well in the frame work... it's simply amazing. Also, you write amazing fight scenes. I feel bad for never reviewing, but I avidly wait for a new chapter, and I'm always pleasantly surprised when a new one is up. It makes my day.
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June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOLY. SHIT.
This chapter is awesome. The drama, the love, the absolute and udder hatred of demonic clown boy, the plot twists.
So the Kurosaki kids (at least two of them) are in some trouble, I wonder how they will deal with it?? What kind of new twisted thing has Mayuri done to himself and the new mod souls and will Ichigo WTFPWN him (pardon my l33t)??? It would also be cool if the Commander General stepped in and "fixed" the Mayuri situation himself. We haven't seen him do any killing either, this might be the one thing that pushes him to it.
Its time to get some serious ass kicking going.
I can't wait for more!
This chapter is awesome. The drama, the love, the absolute and udder hatred of demonic clown boy, the plot twists.
So the Kurosaki kids (at least two of them) are in some trouble, I wonder how they will deal with it?? What kind of new twisted thing has Mayuri done to himself and the new mod souls and will Ichigo WTFPWN him (pardon my l33t)??? It would also be cool if the Commander General stepped in and "fixed" the Mayuri situation himself. We haven't seen him do any killing either, this might be the one thing that pushes him to it.
Its time to get some serious ass kicking going.
I can't wait for more!
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June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I love how developed your characters are. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter so keep up the good work.
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June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! But I demand action! More fighting! Need more fighting! Urgggh! HULK SMASH!
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June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, as always! Fight scene... imminent. Hulk... content. Hulk no smash.
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June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh. I really loved the description of Kin's fight against Benitenchi. Zanpakuto are so much fun to come up with, and I've always been interested in exploring their relationship with their carrier. Great job!
By the way, you've been getting my responses to your e-mails, right? I get concerned when you say it's been a while since we talked.
By the way, you've been getting my responses to your e-mails, right? I get concerned when you say it's been a while since we talked.
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June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really glad you came back and gave us another chapter. I was worried you'd abandon this story until it was shuffled into the forgotten crevices of page 12 or something, which would have been a tragedy. Ordinarily I don't like OCs, so to like a fanfic full of 'em is just testimony to the fact that you've got a great story. Please keep it coming, I'm sure the lurkers feel the same way as I do. ^^
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May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Its great to see a new chapter up!!!
As usual, I loved the interaction between Kin and Tatsuki. I like how you fleshed out some of Tatsuki's back story more and explained her Ban release. Of course, I don't need to explain to you my Tatsuki obsession though... :p
I thought this chapter brought the story along quite well and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Kaien using some of the Shiba techniques to make a beach, brilliant. I knew Ganju's (seemingly) useless ability to turn stuff into sand would come in handy some day.
Well, keep it coming!!
As usual, I loved the interaction between Kin and Tatsuki. I like how you fleshed out some of Tatsuki's back story more and explained her Ban release. Of course, I don't need to explain to you my Tatsuki obsession though... :p
I thought this chapter brought the story along quite well and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Kaien using some of the Shiba techniques to make a beach, brilliant. I knew Ganju's (seemingly) useless ability to turn stuff into sand would come in handy some day.
Well, keep it coming!!