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by Gabby18

schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this so far-GJ and Rukia are a bit of a surprise-can't decide how I feel about them as a couple! I always like Ren/Ichi-very hot couple! I am looking forward to finding out what's wrong w/ Karin (tho I have my suspisions (sp) )! Hope u update soon !!!
schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes, again more good chapters to an already sexy story...Thanks for posting them..
schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh this is a great story...One the last chapter oh hell no I wouldn't let him take the call after getting all hot and bothered he would soo be drank on...Thanks for taking the time to write and post this for our enjoyment
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting tension being built up.
person ives086
schedule November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this story! Please update soon!
person Tennak
schedule October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is almost making me embarressed! Ah well! Then I will just pretend that you're writing this wonderful story for me alone!
I was so happy about your shot idea - it works really well that he starts by remembering dead friends - I was very touched. And then giving his friends a special shot to go with them individually! Great idea!
Grimmjow and Rukia = interesting combo, looking forward to see what you can do with that!
I really like your adult version of Orihime - thanks for making her that way!
I can't wait to see the orangehead + the redhead on the dancefloor together!
Once again - thanks for the story and that you're sharing!

person Tennak
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a really, really hot story! I love it! At first I thought that Ichigo was somewhat ooc but then I realized that I have no idea what he will be like at twenty so your version is just fine. I whole-heartedly approve!
You have made him an incredible hot, self-assured (I hope this is a right word?) gay guy and I want to read more about what happens at his birthday party. It sounds like Renji will be in for a treat!
The way you have explained what has happened in previous years works very well and the fact that Ichigo and Renji haven't seen each other in two years works well for me and sounds plausible.
Very well done and please continue soon!
Thanks so much for sharing!
BTW Love your version of the adult Orihime! (Smiles)