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for Strawberries and Cream

by Zangetsu

schedule April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love the story! It is so HOTT! I almost passed out because of the smexyness. You gotta continue.
schedule December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Finally! God, I've been waiting for you to update this for FOREVER!!! XD I'm glad you're back, and I hope you keep your promise to update this time...Please do! ^^
person kunitsu
schedule December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Glad you are back :D
Cant wait to see whats next for this story
person kunitsu
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh YAY you are back *huggles*
I am looking forward to how you are going to continue this
person Yakumo
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE thos sotry and glad that you're back to update it again. Hichigo/Ichigo FTW! xD
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MOAR UPDATING. MOOOOAAAAR.

Kay, now that I've gotten my crazed fangirling demands out of the way, I'll review smartly. XD~

I'm really enjoying this story! But, there's some stuff that kind of bothers me. >: Like too many periods in places that aren't needed and such. I hope this doesn't offend or anything, because I would hate to upset you since your writing is good and entirely amusing to read.

I was wondering if maybe you had someone to beta your work? Or if you don't, maybe I could beta read it before you post it? :3 I'd really love to talk to you more and fangirl with you over HichIchi. XD
person jabba_pwnage101
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that I've been reading your fic the whole time, and I LOVE IT!!! I'm so happy that you're FINALLY back, and going to continue this story. I've re-read this fic what must be at least 20 times, just waiting for your return. So now that you're back I could just bounce off the walls out of joy! Please hurry and update again! Much love! Bye!
person Keeva
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:( i finally find some hichixichi action and now its on hiatus? today is a sad day...BUT what is up is great! ^^
person Tai
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Writing is a pleassure, it's something one should do for the personal satisfaction of getting one's emotions out or, in this case, lustfull desires out of your head. Reviews are nice and all (I totally understand) but you should write because you want to. Not because others want you to. Your story is good, the characters are accurate and not full of "OMG, I'm hichigo and I'm OOC in this story because I like Ichigo and Orihime is my BFF lolz" , so I honestly don't know what you're worried about. Enjoy writing, expect reviews, but don't get stuck on them and being your motivation for continueing a good story
person Hazy
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ill review for you if it means getting you to wright more of this awesome story!!!!!! Seriously this is a really good story i hope you wright more!!!