rate_review Reviews

that closet is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo dirty!!!...YOU'VE INSPIRED ME!!!!FIC WRITING TIME!!!

i completely love this one shot...its really good...can we say it so should have been in the anime...and as for the flaming i understand you on that one....i have a friend who flames all of mine so i post what i want on another site. lol

Hey Mal it's mario I LOVE the story and ya u can make it work in almost any space if u try hard enough ^__^

heheh, closet sex.
now that's hot.
I don't think Rukia will ever be able
to see that closet the same way again!
^_~

hahah i dont think i have ever seen such an angry authors note.... but i agree, if they dont like it they shoudln't read it... the fuckers..... lol.... anyway splendid story... very kickass.... hope to see more from you

-HOWL

Your author's note was a bit rude. I read your reviews and I didn't see any flames or attacks. I understand how as an author you get edgy with no sleep ( trust me, been there done that)

The story is well written, the only thing that threw me off was the repeating cussing in your note.

As for the italics

All you have to do is shift,< i > to start ( no spaces)

at the begining

and


to end shift, < / i > (no spaces) what you want to be in italics. If this doesn't come up right, I will explain again.

great ^_^ but how in the world did the two of them fit in there ha ha

You formatting of this story sucks. Reformat and maybe I'll read it.

this was really nice but you should have spaced the paragraphs out because it was kind of hard to read after a while and i'm not flaming you but like i said the story was good