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by TrulyWished

schedule September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wai~! you need to update! its been so long and i swear ive read this and the prequel about 300 times by now!!


I NEED new material!!
schedule September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories!! i swear ive read this and the prequel (forgot its name.. one something)!!

could you send me the links (if you still have them) of more ikka/izuru stories? (i cant find any... T-T)
I would love you forever and ever!! (if you still have them, if not - thats fine too)
person VRon8899
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amaaazing..truly amazing!I love how deeply involved you get with all the characters..truly amaizing and wonderfully written, i really cwn't wait for more!! I feel bad for Ikkaku....-shakes head- I would say more praise but then I'd be rambling XDD
person Eremi22
schedule August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omg this is awesome. I haven't read a Bleach fic that was this good in a while. The cliffhanger that is chapter 7 is quite evil by the way. I'm looking forward to your next update!!
person Ferrith
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What are you doing?!
T_T
Better: what the hel ist Yumi doing?!

Love your story since te first chapter!!
But don't let Yumi get between Ikka and Kira!! *sniff*
person rysha and affie (sort of)
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh gods... i'm glad you could update this one... hope all will be well with you soon... Poor Af's stuck at her 'ka-sans in dial up hell and yet again the password isn't working (sigh) she made several interesting noises that for once didn't freak the cats out (speaker phones are wonderful things) we both are enjoying the story and hope you update when life lets you again...(I reccomend lots of fruit if you can that should help the energy thing *grin*
oh and as for Yumi try getting him together with Iba (turning down the speaker as Affie screeches "oh heck no" and there go the cats...

rysha and affie (who say's sorry for our mother henning)
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sigh*

That damn flouncy Yumichika. A closed mouth doesn't get fed. I hope Kira fucks him up good. Did I mention how glad I am that you updated? I am. :)
person ragexmr
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit, I totally didn't realize there had been so many updates on this! I read the first two chapters and figured that was it and when I decide to read them over I see 4 more chapters?! Blew my mind! Love it! Please hurry and update!
person VRon8899
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OK....I love this! I really can't wait to see what happens next..Yume is such a prick but I hope shuhei comes back << >>...will u send me an email when you post the next chapter?

Ronnieronnie01r@aol.com

thaaaaaaanks!!! I can't wait for the next installment!!! -flails wildly-
person Yume
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loving the story so far, even though I originally thought it was just going to be a one shot. There is one thing in chapter five the irritates me to no end. The hakama is the pants they wear. The tomesode is the name of the black top they wear, or just call it a robe. It confused the living daylights out of me when I saw that Shuuhei grabbed Yumichika by the front of his hakama to lift him up. I can point you to websites with proper names of Japanese clothing, I make them in my spare time.