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~takes the E-sake~ Thank-you Drinking to your lastest Chapter which of course is a good one, And no cliff hanger ~snickers and shots the sake~ I will be looking forward to you next chapter to see what your creative mind comes up with..Thanks for posting the new chapter

I am not reading any more of this because it always makes me cry. Whatever...me not reading this is like Rangkiu holding out from Zaraki. In fact...

Me: *folds arms* You two go through too many changes for me! I'm not reading this!

Zaraki: *props up on elbow in bed and smirks at me* That is no way to be. Orion gave you a reason why I wear my neck band, and I just banged my hot wife. Are you really going to stop reading?

Rangiku: Yeah, you have to stay tuned to watch him fuck up Kurotsuchi for trying to get over on him!

Zaraki: You said fuck, Beloved...*throws the covers over their heads and has sex again*

Me: 0_o I'll be good now...


Loved it. Here, it's custom for me to pour your sake, and you can pour mine. KAMPAI!

First off, allow me to say that I apologize for not reviewing the previous chapters. They've all been wonderful. Honestly, I'm not as good at reviewing as I should be. Second, let me praise you. This is a fascinating, well written story exploring two complicated characters. You've done an excellent job! It's great! I'm enjoying the exploration of their personalities as well as their growing love for one another. And the sex...it rocks! I'm a huge fan of Zaraki's though it's difficult to find het romantic fanfic about the man. You've delivered an amazing work. I have to confess, also, that I really want to know where you're going about with the neck band! Anyway, good work, keep going, and thank you!

Are you going to continue this story?

Fucking Kurotsuchi. He's just mad because he has to create people to be around him. That's why he doesn't have ears! And Zaraki! I could fisticuff him. Oh well. Typical man, and typical WONDERFUL chapter. Thanks.

yay, another ansty confrontation (or confucktation as i once said in a story i wrote - only mine was out of anger, and yours will be lovely sex =]) keep updating! i'm checking!!

Hmm that is a really great chapter. Can't wait for more...ok I guess I have too but hey post a new chappy soon please..

i loved this inclusion of gin. oo, there are so many things you can do with this plot. thank you for updating consistently! this story is the only one i check all the time. =] ahha it's also what i would call 'tasteful smut,' lol. i actually feel like gin will appear again. i hope so! i love sexual tension - the previous chapters made me water-eyed before!

New Chapter! SCORE! I was hoping Zaraki would put the smackdown on Gin, but I'm sure there's plenty of time for that later. Everybody wants to interrupt the newlyweds! I just think they're jealous. You're such a great writer and I wait eagerly for your next update.

this story was soon demanding and sweet how they found love in lust! I mean wow! i was so in the story it was the most erotic i have read to date. And trust I've read alot! Congradulations! Its perfect. please please please update soon i cant wait for more!
luv,your new fan.