rate_review Reviews

I just read all of the chapters of this. I'd never even thought of this pairing. It was very very well written and so very hot! I hope to see more of this and from you!

Plot is good yeah but SMUT IS BETTER ...ok so I am a perv...but hey I love this story thanks for the new chapter. Your story is interesting thanks again.

Love it love it love it. Gin is an idiot...and smut is good. Plot is great though. I don't know, words fail me. Apparently not you though; my face is glued to Zaraki's sticky honey nuts. Thanks for another wonderful chapter.

I LOVE IT... Oh so romantic. Thank-you for taking the time to write and post this story I can't wait for you to post a new chapter

Is Zaraki going to tell Matsumoto about his previous lovers? Why was Yachiru so pissed about him getting married? I understand she's afraid that Kenpachi won't spend that much time with her anymore, but she seemed downright hostile! Was she really going to slap Matsumoto? If I was Ran I'd sleep with one eye open with that kid. The idea of them having sex for three straight days strikes me as funny. I don't think they'll last that long. Doesn't matter how horny you are, everyone needs to sleep, eat, and use the toilet every so often lol. Your story is so great and I wait on pins and needles for you to update.

Ok, though you hit on the cliche of love and quick marriage, i dont really care, since it only means more sex! Hot and very well-written chapter.

thanks for updating. even though it feels like your story could end now, i feel like it could go on forever (i wish it would!) - it'd still be interesting to see what happens in Gin appears (i always loved that pairing. =])

You did it again. My heart is in my throat. Loved when he threatened to cut Kuchiki. Hated when he was indecisive about feelings. Why are all the taicho playa hatas? I was happy to come on here to read a new chapter, this is probably the ONLY non yaoi story on this whole damn site I love. Please keep up the good work, and as a fellow writer, I'll um...work on having more gusto to write my stories. I have the best of intentions when I get up in the morning, but after 9 hours of work and 2 hours of traffic, I feel dead inside lol. *hugs*

HOLY FUCK!!!

I don't think I have ever read a story as well written and with such an addictive plot throughout my entire time reading stories on this site. Your writing skills are just simply amazing. I cannot wait for the next chapter of this story.

OMGoddess! They got married! SQUEEEE! I love it! Zaraki wants babies and now I can picture a bunch of red-headed mini-Zaraki's or raven-haired little Matsumoto's. Yay! *does the happy dance*