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November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story, it was like Ubber good xD ohhh i hope you write more!!
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November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would really like to see this story to the end, and probably a sequel. I mean I not only find it enjoyable, but you write it like it is. Your style intruges and enlightens. Each Chapter was hotter than the last, weather it was the sex or there budding relashinship? It remained strong.
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November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This new chapter made me sad. I want Kenpachi and Ran to get together. I'm a sucker for happy endings, so sue me. I was thrilled when Zaraki knocked on her door at the end and demanded to talk to her. I hope they patch things up.
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November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My heart is in my chest. He loves her too, I know it. This was wonderful, thanks. Please update.
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November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really loved this one.
Zenpaki is pretty close to canon for fanfic. Though, if you don't mind my saying so, I think it would have been better instead of Matsumoto, creating an OFC without changing a word of it. Somehow she doesn't seem to behave the way I envision Matsumoto, she seems submissive (I love submissive, but it just doesn't fit my image of her)
Keep up the good writing, I'm hooked on this one!!
Zenpaki is pretty close to canon for fanfic. Though, if you don't mind my saying so, I think it would have been better instead of Matsumoto, creating an OFC without changing a word of it. Somehow she doesn't seem to behave the way I envision Matsumoto, she seems submissive (I love submissive, but it just doesn't fit my image of her)
Keep up the good writing, I'm hooked on this one!!
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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love how Mastumoto and Zaraki always end up in each other's arms. Sooo, when's she going to tell the Big Taicho that she loves him? Or are they going to keep denying their true feelings for one another?
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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You have made me love this pairing! This is great! I tend to shy away from Zaraki story because they get to brutal, but you've written this perfectly! I would have totally ran out if I was Ran too. I thought it was funny yet understandable! Please update soon!
Chigirl
Chigirl
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October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Write more Please!!!!
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October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. I'll admit I was considering doing a story similar to this, and I still might, there is not enough of this paring. Zaraki is hot. I'd give it to him. Great work and yes, please continue.
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October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
unusual pairing but oddly it works. Lets see where you take this story. good work