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by orionshadow

schedule April 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please update this! I've read it over and over !!!! Lol. But I can say now that I'm all caught up with the manga and anime, that I cried my eyes out at what really happens between Matsumoto and gin. But I'm still a Kenpachi/Rangiku lover!!!! So you see you have to update to make me stop crying over gin. Lol.
person Amy
schedule March 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Matsumoto and Kenpachi would never have occurred to me, but I'm willing to give anything with Kenpachi a shot. They work surprisingly well together! I'm really enjoying this. I speed-read everything once and now I'm going back more slowly. I think you've done a good job in keeping everyone basically acting like themselves and keeping the story moving in an interesting way. I don't review often, but I was so tickled by Kenpachi's "don't die and don't fuck anyone else" rules that I was compelled to tell you how much I like your work.
person Toast
schedule February 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So.....Just thought i'd drop you an encouraging review (n_n) You're a fantastic writer and this story as well as the others in the universe you've created are outstanding. I really hope you haven't given up on us here because that would be such a shame and i might even shed a tear (>_<) So I guess i'll just wait patiently for the next update. Fingers crossed it comes soon.
person Kpower80
schedule January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it all and def cant wait for an update! Oh please update soon! :)
schedule December 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhhhhh this should keep me satisfied for a few days. Good job! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!! Ahhhhhhh!!!!!!!
person Erosu787
schedule December 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I couldn't wait to read your fic much less review it. I am glad you posted it up just in time for New Years.
20,000 hits Congratulations! This creative fic deserves more!

Wow I must say Gin's mental manipulation on Ran is very dead on his character, The plot is thickening more as Ran delves deeper into the rabbit hole, hopefully she comes out of this all intact. I know this is strange to say but I felt no sympathy towards him in this chapter, perhaps it is because like Rangiku I find it hard to believe he truly wished to 'protect' her after letting Aizen nearly kill her. And rape is inexcusable no matter what the reason and whom it is done with. I can't wait to see Zaraki again, I bet he is going crazy over this.

Your reference to Romeo and Julliet was quite clever. I liked how Rangiku's quick wits saved herself the trouble from kissing Gin without having to resort to using her lips.
I have to say that although Gin singing such a western (the location not the genre) song is quite odd, it makes me question if Rangiku's mentality is really breaking or if this is another one of Gin's deviant tricks to question her own sanity and make her more vulnerable and easier to manipulate under his wishes.

A desirable chapter indeed. I toast to the new year with you!
schedule December 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon, I'm going crazy checking multiple times a day to see if you updated. I can't wait!!!!! (also update for the love of a friend). Please please please!!!!!!
schedule December 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap your story is amazing, I haven't been able to put it down!!!!! And ahhhhh what a cliffy!!!!! I hope you post a new chapter soon or I'll go crazy! Your writing is amazing!!!!!!!
person Jennyt82
schedule November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A chapter all for me?!! I feel so loved =) If you do end up disowning your family, i have a sister that i'm willing to part with....As long as it gets me chapters faster, i'll even let you have her for free! p.s. Can Zaraki come back in the next chapter? Pretty please!!
person Fostersb
schedule November 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and I am so happy to see that there was an update. O can't wait to see if Rangiku can find out who the traitor is, if she will be rescued by Zakari and definitely to see more loving between the two. Update soon!