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I like the fact that even though Rukia is being a douchebag that Ran is still being nice to her. Dont like Byakuya having to marry Kiyone. I think I would satisfy him more. I didn't drink today, but I did just make toast with strawberry jam. Feel free to have some. :)

Heya, as always good work though i did mourn the lack of Zaraki-Matsumoto interaction in this chapter, i suppose it did clear up some things. Fingers crossed that we get more interaction in the next chapter. I really hope you update soon because i do love this story, it's one of the few that i actively follow and check for updates.

YAY!!!! I was wondering if you forgot about this one!Hee Hee(=^.^=) I was so happy when I saw that you kept it going! I can't wait for the next chapter to come out!!!!! Thank you

Wonderful Chapter as always, can't wait for 30!

I have to tell you....I have been SOOOOO obsessed with reading this fic that I could hardly do anything else!!! hahahaha!! Well...not really....BUT I have enjoyed reading this immensely and I can't wait to get the answers to so many damn questions....the father of Retsus "baby"....Isane....how things will go for Renji and Rukia....and all the other relationships that sprouted throughout the story!! I hope you update VERY soon!!!

You are so right...not all love is reciprocated. Your stories make me hold my breath. I can't take the angst!!! Lol...you're turning me into an alcoholic. I suppose we are the next Ukitake and Kyoraku hahaha. As always, infinitely enjoyable, heart wrenchingly dramatic. And I just realized you live in Australia. Here's a marker, write 'DUMBASS' on my forehead. XD

i really liked this story in the beginning but now its getting kinda of weird. its like you've lost your inspiration or your just tired of the story. i mean whats with everyone getting pregnant and then everyone having miscarragies. you have too many relationships going on in this story and not enough back story on them so we really don't understand their problems and dont care. thats the problem when your trying to tell multiple stories but in one fic but only one persons pov. Ran can't tell us what rukia is thinking or feeling or why she's behaving like a cold bitch (i mean telling one of your olderst friends who you obviously been intimate with and who you know is in love with you that the only reason that you agreed to marry him is because he knocked you up and now that the baby is gone so is he and he by the way i'm in love with another man, cold really cold) anyway if your going to have mutlitple couples in a fic its best to do more then one persons pov. next ch i'd advise you to stray from the norm and have it told from rukias pov so we can learn about her relationship with renji and the other guy who she loves (i mean the only reason i know about fong and hitsugaya relationship is because of your other story)or tell the story from another characters pov, otherwise i suggest that you keep the stories focus on Ran and zaraki everything else just makes the story to messy, confusing and unappealing. i did so enjoy the beginning of this fic and i hope your future chapters recapture what this fic has seemed to have lost

Yay!!! You came back with another fantastic update. Internet sake and cookies for you :) I agree that it was definitely sad about Renji and Rukia but hey you're the writer whatever you want goes. Here's hoping that you update again soon though i'm not really very fussy about which of the three you do so long as you do them. See ya. Toast Xx

Very interesting and i have to say i like the direction you are taking the story in. This departure from canon is far more interesting than what we are getting in the manga right now. As always you have outdone yourself and i eagerly await your next chapters.

Nice chapter keep up the good work.