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Holy update, Batman! To the PT Cruiser! Those last few paragraphs confused me, but then again I just drank a whole bottle of Nyquil. Damn head cold. I'm glad Yachiru is accepting of Matsumoto. Zaraki is great, and Kurotsuchi makes my nose run. Poor Ichigo. I'll be his girlfriend, and he can go to the store and buy me liquor. Wait, he isn't old enough, is he? Damn teenagers.

Have a Promethazine tablet. I've upgraded from alcohol to pills! (It's prescribed for my ovarian aches)
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"give A Little" Crazy Penis.... Well what the hell, it's New Years Time anyway! I am so psyched up for the next chapter. I really want to see how Captain Byakuya reacts to Rangiku when she approaches him seperately. My fav part was when Rangiku was acting like an airhead, and everyone seemed so shocked!! I was dying laughing. Zaraki is really restraining himself, Ichigo is kinda pushin him huh? Grean work and I can't wait for another update

Yay update!!!! that chapter was awesome as usual and i loved the "be nice to my mummy" comment by yachiru too adorable. lots of hinting explanation of relationships and interaction in this chapter very cool. can't wait for your next update of any kind. all your work is great. OXOX your fan Kyradda

Yay, an update i was beginning to think you didn't like us anymore. *pout* Anyway Happy new year. Don't leave us so long without an update again. Thank you. Oh and the chapter was excellent as usual.

I'm slowly catching up, I was away for a while, but I'm so glad that there's so many new chapters for me to read. This chapter was truly action packed! When Rangiku woke up and admitted to being raped again in her dream, I really had to take five. I was embarassed for her. Admitting to being raped in a room fo five guys? Whoa! I feel really bad that you've strted to add so much extra explanation into your story, I really like to think about what the character's trying to say. I like to read between the lines. It's like your writing to an idiot. A random example of this (not from your fanfic) :
The man was in an oven set at 350. The man was in pain. The man was burning.
I like to read between the lines to understand what's going on. A little bit more vagueness would be appreciated.

I've spent the last 3 hours updating myself from chapter 17 up until your current Chapter 21. It was totally worth every minute of it!!! I thought that the pregnancy would probably throw me off, but you set it up really well in "The Hope". I was really starting to miss the hellified sex too. *wink wink* I can't wait for the next update. I raise my Cup of Vanilla Euphoria (A.K.A French Vanilla Hot Coco) to you and your genius
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Very very good, way different pairings then I was expecting, more soon please

sorry i haven't been able to review (>.<) but i'm so glad you updated!! i am in love with this story hehe. but wow .. is retsu really gonna let ran stay even if she's pregnant?? dumDUMdum ... lol it also kinda makes me wonder how zaraki's gonna be as a daddy and how their kids gonna be like lol, wellz i really hope you update again soon (^.^) ... i can't wait you are an amazing writer =)

sorry i haven't been able to review (>.<) but i'm so glad you updated!! i am in love with this story hehe. but wow .. is retsu really gonna let ran stay even if she's pregnant?? dumDUMdum ... lol it also kinda makes me wonder how zaraki's gonna be as a daddy and how their kids gonna be like lol, wellz i really hope you update again soon (^.^) ... i can't wait you are an amazing writer =)

Yay! Sex! I'm short on words, I'm sick (again) and I just drank a bottle of Nyquil. Hopefully Ran can stay and fight with her man, and maybe Momo can die? It will make my nose stop running XD.

Thanks for the update and hope you are well. Have some Canada Dry ginger ale mixed with green tea. It placates me.