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Yaay, you updated!!!! I was beginning to think you had forgotten about us. :( but you've proved me wrong with this long awaited update, as usual excellent work. But please, please don't leave so long a gap for the next one. I'm not expecting tomorrow, but the day after tomorrow would be nice. I've started reading for the love of a friend in the meantime, sorry about the distinct lack of updates, next chapter I swear, but that is also excellently written. So as i said update soon.

Pretty good as always, I was waiting for the pregnancy talk to come, nobody can have sex that many times and the man never pull out and not get the girl pregnant. Especially with no contraceptives in use.

10 points for cliffy...wonderful smut as usual! In earlier chapters I laughed a lot when Ran needed to eat but now? She's gonna want to eat a whole lot more...wonder how Zaraki's going to react to that ^_^.

o-o; I, um...Really enjoy reading this story. ;>> I've always LOVED ZARAKI, and it kinda' makes me mad that everyone is starting to copy you. By copy you, I mean that lots of people are starting to use Zaraki Kenpachi in they're fan fics. Anyways. Keep up the good work. I'll continue reading. e.e;

As usual awesome and as for plot twists they keep me reviewing so keep it up can't wait for next update. It's coming tommorrow right? Just kidding but hurry back please

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This chapter, along with listening to Daft Punk's 'Voyager' made me VERY happy. I love you, Zaraki, Matsumoto, and Lil' Bit(the baby) I'm so excited!!!

How is your cold? Better, I hope. Here's some Eucalyptus Mint Aromatherapy from Bath and Body Works for you to soak and relax in. You deserve it.
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Excellent installment in what i believe to be the best series on this website. As i have said before i look forward more to your chapter updates than i do the actual series its based off of. It's nice to finally see toushiro and soi fong getting some happiness after the rocky road their relationship has traveled and i can only look forward to seeing whom yumichika loves though i already suspect. Anyway wonderful chapter and i cant wait to read the next chapter of obsidian and alabaster

Momo is sickening. Straight jacket indeed is what she needs! (That sounded rather lofty, didn't it?) I can't believe Soi and Toshiro were going at it like that in front of Ran, but I knew they would come around! I hope that its Zaraki at the end that pressed up against her. If not, then someone is gonna get fucked up.

What is this illness business? Nothing a glass of bourbon can't straighten out, right? I'll make you some ginger and honey tea. Drink some kids orange juice, as it has more vitamins than normal oj. Feel better love, ok? *hugs*

Cliffhanger again?!?! That chapter was awesome so many new developments and all. Can't wait to find out what awaits us over that cliff. Please update soon!!

yeah! an update, I wonder who accosted her? who indeed. Anyways I love you story, I mean I must have read it at least 5 times over again. It's one of my favorite stories and has started me on ZaXMa which is now my favorite pairing in Bleach. You're story inspired me to try to write a different pairing while still including ZaXMa but as I continued writing I started seeming some parallels with your's so I wanted to see if you would mind. My story is chiefly Nanao and Kyoraku so: Nanao needs something but avoids Kyoraku because she doesn't think he can give her what she needs so she goes to Zaraki. Eventually it'll turn into a NanaoXKyoraku and ZarakiXMatsumoto but my story seems almost like a prequel to your's, sort of one of Zaraki's partners before Matsumoto. Anyway I can email the first 2 chapters if you want to read it, I didn't set out to write it similar to your's but well I hope you don't mind. If you do I won't post it but I'd like it if you wouldn't mind reading it first.
you can e-mail at peppers1661@hotmail.com if you want or you can respond on review or whatever. Anyway I love you writing style and the way you capture the emotions of the characters while still keeping them in character!!!