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April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
GROSS!!!
Omaeda just made me fart. I made a 70 on my anatomy test. Um...Omaeda is gross. Great chapter. And Omaeda is gross.
Omaeda just made me fart. I made a 70 on my anatomy test. Um...Omaeda is gross. Great chapter. And Omaeda is gross.
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April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
whow, didn't see that coming.
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February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a very good story. Very unusual couple but you made it work.
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February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A very good chapter as always. You seem to capture the essence of Zaraki's wild and crazy personality while giving him an amount of depth rarely seen in the real show. Can't wait to see what happens next!
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February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh-ho! A Twilight reference, eh? I admit I lol'd a bit. :D
WOO! I'm glad that Toshiro helped Kenpachi out. And jeez, way to spill the beans Toshiro. Our kids will play together. Funny thing is, he doesn't even know that Soi is preggers yet. That'll come sooner than you think mah boy!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
P.S. I really, REALLY, love this line for some reason. "All of it. If she lives, I’ll disappoint her and she’ll reject me because I failed her. If she dies I have an excuse to give up.”
WOO! I'm glad that Toshiro helped Kenpachi out. And jeez, way to spill the beans Toshiro. Our kids will play together. Funny thing is, he doesn't even know that Soi is preggers yet. That'll come sooner than you think mah boy!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
P.S. I really, REALLY, love this line for some reason. "All of it. If she lives, I’ll disappoint her and she’ll reject me because I failed her. If she dies I have an excuse to give up.”
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February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Toshiro and Kenpachi...what are we gonna do with them? Nanao gets on my neves, btw. I loved the chapter, but I'm sure you already know that. Want to help me study for my anatomy test? (or even better, take it for me?)
Here's some frosted pink lemonade with just a few splashes of rum. Tart, and not for operating heavy machinery. :)
Here's some frosted pink lemonade with just a few splashes of rum. Tart, and not for operating heavy machinery. :)
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February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yaay!!! An update within a week. Cookies for you. :) The chapter was excellent as they all are. It was interesting to see what Zaraki thought about Matsumoto's abduction. That's a hint by the way. Where's that promised chapter of Obsidian and Alabaster? Anyway let's concentrate on For the Love of a Friend. I'm hoping that you have the next chapter all planned and almost written because i do want to see how you get Toshiro and Soi back together. Here's hoping that the next update is in a week as well.
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February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi, Dante here. I felt that after reading this and different circumstances i needed to make a profile on AFF, so this is still Dante. Thankyou very much for mentioning me in this chapter, it means a lot. I liked this chapter a lot, (SPOILERS) it made me think of the training scene with Ran and Soi in Different Circumstances, With both how they are fighting against someone who is teaching them new things. Seeing as I have read DC I know what is going to happen, at least basically, so some tension is a little removed, but this story still works well. Really can't wait to see how thing turn out from Soi and Toshiro's POV. And, to keep up my chapterly question session (this may be a regular occurance!) i wanted to ask whether as a character in the series you prefer Soi, Toshiro, Zaraki or Matsumoto (or any other character i haven't mentioned).
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February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, gotta say, i love this story. It's charged sexually, and the plot really follows, and i haven't noticed any inconsistencies there or anywhere. And Soi Fon and Hitsugaya are such an original pairing! I've never seen it before, but it works really well. I caught this story, and read it in one night, I just couldn't stop reading. I never really review stories, but this one particularly warrants the merit. Really excellent work, but i haven't read your companion story, Different Circumstances, so I may be missing out. Ill be sure to read that, and I just wanted to inquire if you supported any other particular ships, other than Zaraki/Matsumoto (and Soi/Toshiro). Eagerly awaiting your next chapter.
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February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well...it wasn't as exciting as I thought it would have been but i'm still glad for the update. Soi is surprisingly a very simple woman (lol) but I find that I enjoy thoughts of Soi more than thoughts of Toushiro because her personality has never really been explored in the fanfic world which is why I would ask for more but it's quite sufficient for now. Just don't waste the next chapter on a boring 'ole fight, 'kay?
I'm looking forward to your next update...
I'm looking forward to your next update...