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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hot damn I didn't see that one coming.
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Smacking potential! That makes me happy. ^^
Oooh, Toshirto's a sneaky bastard he is. If I hadn't known better, I'd say he's just as twisted and manipulative as Soi is at times. They really do make a perfect match! Anyone else by this point would have thrown their hands in the air, rolled their eyes, and loudly declared the other totally not worth the hanky panky.
More please! ^^
Oooh, Toshirto's a sneaky bastard he is. If I hadn't known better, I'd say he's just as twisted and manipulative as Soi is at times. They really do make a perfect match! Anyone else by this point would have thrown their hands in the air, rolled their eyes, and loudly declared the other totally not worth the hanky panky.
More please! ^^
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Tee hee, Yeah, I guess it wasn't too hard to figure out. :p
But poor Rangiku...I really hope she doesn't die...Kenpachi would cause an apocalypse. I like that Toshiro and Soi seem to be moving in the right direction with their relationship, but then you go and make them have angry sex! Oh well, I secretly liked it anyway. >.>
But poor Rangiku...I really hope she doesn't die...Kenpachi would cause an apocalypse. I like that Toshiro and Soi seem to be moving in the right direction with their relationship, but then you go and make them have angry sex! Oh well, I secretly liked it anyway. >.>
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ha! I knew he wasn't asleep, no one could sleep through that and if someone out there can, thats some strong sleeping. lol.
Well this is getting even more interesting, the one thing I'm waiting for is Soi Fon or someone telling Toshiro that he's going to be a father.
Well this is getting even more interesting, the one thing I'm waiting for is Soi Fon or someone telling Toshiro that he's going to be a father.
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November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
One of the reasons I like this story is that you don't keep things on the same path. You use sadness, anger, hatred, and love instead of the lovey dovey all is happy stuff that I see in some stories. Chapter 21 was all right. It seemed like it would have been better to have the first part, Toshiro's view, together with chapter 20 so it would have had more of an impact. The ending was interesting because you made an interesting comparison between companionship and state of mind. Still, overall, a good read.
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October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love love love the way your twisted little mind works. I just want to slap Soi sometimes, but it's this very ignorance about human interaction and basic relationships that makes her endearing I suppose. Poor Toshiro! Of all the things to get accused of, he gets accused of being the gay father of Kiyone's child. That's truly awesome. Thank you for writing.
And I do like the Soi you've written. Can she please get smacked at some point during the story?
And I do like the Soi you've written. Can she please get smacked at some point during the story?
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October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 20 was great. You used a small amount of smut to keep your readers interested while using the chapter to flesh out Soi's character somewhat. Thanks for the mention and don't worry, I understand everyone has things to do. I just say update soon to all the stories I like.
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
holy shit... its been quite some time since i last reviewed, or even sent you an E-mail. sorry about taking so long. but it is nice to see Toushiro and Soi on the verge of making up. talk to you later.
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Arigatou finally a little happiness for our two tragic protagonists, a dream however? soi is far more cunning then i ever thought possible taking advantage of poor sweet little toushiro like that kudos on another amazing chapter
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You've made Soi extremely hard...if I was pregnant and itchy and hungry, I'd demand babydaddy to pay homage to me and suck my feet and make me dinner and rub my back and buy me clothes and wash my car and put me through college and...sorry. I turned that into my own fantasy. Um...yes, great chapter. She's warming up to him, I just know it. And the dream thing was very cute. Have some pink lemonade with Stoli. It's refreshing and tart, just like moi.
*makes a space for you near the tent so we can spy on Soi and Toshiro*
*makes a space for you near the tent so we can spy on Soi and Toshiro*