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for For The Love of a Friend

by orionshadow

person Elora
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh-ho-ho! I'm betting our little Shiro-chan was awake... >_>

Oh, but really, I'm so happy things are starting to go good again!! I was a little worried when the aide reported that he had seen Toshiro and Nemu together, but it's all okay now! =D
person get buck
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter.
person cyberdark
schedule October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter 19. I think it was the best chapter you've written. Update soon!
person Cyberdark
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's great to see that you're working on this story again. It's a phenomenal piece of writing and you obviously put a lot of time into each chapter. Please keep at it!
person kashima
schedule October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Poor toushiro it seems like everything and everyone is out to make him look like a shameless sex fiend in his darling soi's eyes. Congratulations on another wonderful chapter full of twists and turns. its about six hours before they post the new chapter of the bleach manga where i live i can only hope that its as good as this chapter of your story
person Elora
schedule October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know, I always have felt bad for Nemu. She doesn't deserve anything that happens to her. Poor thing. But I think you did a fantastic job writing her!! And it sounds like just something Mayuri would make her do. He freaks me out.

And I can't wait for Byakuya to find out about his kid. Oh my god, it's going to be hilarious!

Keep up the great writing!!
person waterspear567
schedule October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy hell, I didn't see that one coming.
person the joker
schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
he he he that was fun.
schedule September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch 15: Well that threw me off completely. Man, was I wrong. But that's what so great about it. Unexpected. Great so far.
schedule September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch 16: And finally Shunsui's love interest is revealed...hehe. But that was classic Shunsui lying on the floor clutching a bottle of sake to himself. Great stuff.