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September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch 17: Wow, that was a HUGE misunderstanding. Damn it, Soi is making it worse. -_-
Well at least she decided to keep the child, that was the only good news that came out of this chapter. heh.
Well at least she decided to keep the child, that was the only good news that came out of this chapter. heh.
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September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch 18: Man, everything sure has gone to hell. Soi misunderstanding situations. Hitsugaya smacked dab in the middle of something he has nothing to do with. And still counting Matsumoto and the squad that was sent to rescue her, haven't returned. Life is really complicated for them right now...haha. Amazing read, can't wait to see this updated.
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September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch 1: Amazing start so far. Can't wait to read more.
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September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
CH 2: This story is brilliant...switching, showing what she was thinking...Amazing. Best smut I've read on the net so far that is Bleach. By the way, Just throwing it out there I would really like to see a Yoru/Urahara smut story as side project from you...when she first had sex with him..hehe. You have such a talent in writing. You keep Soi and Toushirou so in character, I wouldn't mind seeing how you write Yoruichi and Kisuke together.
Well, anyways, great story so far.
Well, anyways, great story so far.
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September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch 3: Great stuff...I don't think I'll be reading your other story not really a fan of the pairing sorry. Anyways, great turnaround...the way it's going it looks like Soi will be paying a visit to Toushirou in the real world...hehe.
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September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch 4: Toushiro...you idiot. -_-
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September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch 5: The good ol' breakup sex thing then make up sex...haha. Going at a great pace so far. Love it.
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September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch 6: That last part was intense, to not be able to come up with something that would calm Soi...You did a great job in capturing his helplessness of the situation. Poor Toshirou.
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September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well that ended...pleasantly. -_-
I do love drama. haha. Great job.
I do love drama. haha. Great job.
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September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch 8: Meh, this chapter seemed like one huge ass filler. So didn't care much about it.