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for For The Love of a Friend

by orionshadow

person Elora
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, you silly Soi. To think that Toshiro would sleep with another man, let alone Shunsui!! Her pregnancy must have addled her brains somewhat...

But, great as always!! Can't wait for another chapter! And I hope you feel better soon! Colds are no fun...
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm. Are they under here? Or are they over there?? They don't seem to be anywhere!!!

I'm sorry, I was just looking for Hitsugaya's balls and manhood because they are clearly no where in sight...

Any normal red blooded male who was accused of being a queer would have slapped the bitch, told her to shut the hell up for 5 minutes and sorted the whole mess out.

If he hopes to regain any of it he's gonna have to bust his way into the 2nd Division and sort all this out...
person vic
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my god that was so funny. Toshiro gay...poor soi fon!

i was just thinking but soi fon is a cougar. Toshiro is young in soul society standads so any Captain is older than him and that includes soi fon.
person waterspear
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn, I want to know what happens next.
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Never have I wanted to strangle Toshiro so much as I do right now. What ever happened to screaming out "I love you!!!" Why can't men be romantic?!! Grrr...I'm listening to Grieg's concerto in a minor...it's a dark and angry key. Have some more orange juice and here's a shot of bourbon. You earned it. Feel better sweetheart.
person Mike Tyson
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yet another great chapter from my favorite writer.
person Elora
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And the plot grows a bit thicker. I really do love the way you right. I can't wait for more! Poor Toshiro. I am such a fan of happy endings, I really hope he ends up with Soi Fon.
person Bloo
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, I love it.
But the whole hymen part was total bullshit, as there's nothing like that and almost made quit reading, I'm glad I continued. Can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay for the special Happy Birthday...and the fact that my telekenisis works. I unknowingly implanted the notion for you to update this chapter. Heheheh...also...

“I don’t like to see any of the female flowers of the Seireitei distressed. When they smile, they blossom. When they cry, they droop.”

That was BRILLIANT. May I borrow it for my story? You are so precious. Muah muah muah and thanks for a wonderful update. I want Soi and Soi Jr. to be happy. Toshiro can deal with just being placated. And Shunsui needs to sit his old ass down too! Plotting and going on...ol' bastid lmao!!!
person Kyradda
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OK... are you going to tell us there is something in the water because there really is an epidemic of pregnancy it is nuts!! But it does make plot twists very hard to track. Loving the story keep up the great work and i hope you update something again soon! :)