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for For The Love of a Friend

by orionshadow

person tylendel
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! It's been too long. I'm so glad you updated this again..

HOW MANY TWISTS AND CRUVES CAN YOU KEEP STRAIGHT IN A PLOT?! Hats off to you, if I'd been the one writing your story, I'd have gotten myself very confused. You're awesome at keeping your readers hooked and barking for more. Keep it up, for all your fans' sake! ^^
person Elora
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, and I was so happy to see that you'd updated! Keep them coming please!

Hmmmm...How many women does that make pregnant now? Is it all just coincidence, or is something bigger happening? Something to do with the Aizen incident perhaps? Ooooh, your plot thickens!!! Can't wait for more!
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow...Pregger females everywhere. Just what did Kenpachi start with his lie about Rangiku?

I love the direction this story is going, just as I love how you are tying this one into your other one "Diffrent Circumstances" I found myself wondering how you would tie both of them together and you are doing wonderfully. I find myself constantly checking both stories to see updates but I get confused sometimes between the two. I have to re read them to see which story has which scene but again wonderfully written.

I hope to see another update soon.

Happy Writing and Many Reviews and cookies.
person Big Ralf
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really didn't see that coming.
person kamiyoni
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OrionShadow wrote: Hehehehe. Poor Toshiro. How many other females will declare their love for him?

Careful now Orion, some of us might take more meaning to that statement lol. You weren't kdding when you were talking about Kiyone's twists, Her being knocked up by Byakuya was something impressively unexpected. Yeah the Pregnancy epidemic is certainly a disturbing idea (hopes to any higher deity that Isane hasn't been with anyone) , Perhaps its just that Soi is worring too much.
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
my god this is a good story.
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yamamoto is a wanksta right about now. I see Soi is cracking...she gonna let Toshiro hit it soon. Kiyone reminds me of a bag of crushed corn chips. You just look at it and shake your head in disgust. Still enjoying the story, still no job. It gives me time to create my hit list. Got any names for me?


*pours more e-sake*
person Elora
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you are a great writer!!! I've been hooked since the first chapter! I love how the entire story isn't just SEX, but enough of it is. I like my porn with plot, thank you, and you've done that! YAY! I can't wait for more chapters, and I really want to know what's going to happen with Soi's baby. Will she keep it? I don't know! Aum...And I really feel for Kenpachi, poor guy. And oh my God, when I read that Yachiru got stabbed! Well, I don't need to summarize your own story for you, but needless to say, I cannot wait for more! Keep up the great writing!
person Cybill
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, as always!!! More!
person kamiyoni
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
heh i forgot if i reviewed the last chapter or not, anyway, nice touch with Kiyone, i certainly would have never thought up that one(the fights for Ukitake's attention strayed me from that thought.), it'll be nice to see how this new one-sided love intrest will develop (possible threesome? lol no, i'm JK). oh and i'm wondering about Toushiros height compared to Soi, IIRC hes at least mid shoulder level to her(by description i wasn't sure how you were going about in the fic).