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Wow just... wow.

great chapter, i can guess that Soi-Fon isn't going to make any of this easy, as well i hope the mystery of what i reminded you will be solved.

on another topic i had been toying around with thoughts concerning Halibel(the current female Espada) and she would end up becoming sort of an antihero(if not outright joining Ichigo and Co.), while in terms of fanfics should would fight Toushiro and turn out to be a complete Shotacon and proceed to glomp him and such. lol

Toshiro is a booger eater, but so is Soi. I wish she could stop being such a mean psuedo lesbian...and I say she is psuedo, because if you aren't straight after getting banged by Hitsugaya, there was no hope to begin with. Both stories are coming together nicely, and I like the different points of view. It's harder to write that way, making some characters know more than others, although we as readers know the whole story. Nice touch. :)

oh i really like this chapter because soi fon was such a bitch and she was so deliciously evil after the sex.

Also if yamamoto and nano get together could Shunsui be relieved that there's no one to bug him anymore but at the same time there's no on to care for him or pay much attention to him. So its a bit like a double edge sword.

just thought i'd pop in and mention about Hitsugaya being the #1 most popular character in Bleach by latest Shonen Jump poles. with this i'd hope to see more doujinshi featuring our favorite shota Taicho.

I've read 1-9 in one go.

Although I can't say Soi is one of my favorite Toro-chan is.

I think I can see where some of this is going.
But once again, it's your world and I'll just come back and visit after another update.

Well, well, well...I have been reading from this site since there were merely 500 fics uploaded, and since I read yours I -had- to make a username so I could thank you for your work. Very rarely do you see an author who paints a picture like you do, not to mention branching off with other characters in different fics, but keeping the stories of them all intertwined. I havent been this enthralled in a story for quite some time, and am not the least bit embarrassed to say that I yearn for more. You've raised the bar quite a bit...let's see if you can keep that up. I look forward to your next chapter in both of you fics. -Ravenor

hmm... that talk with Kyoraku reminded me of the fact i haven't seen a fanfic of Tousirho/Nanao, or Hitsugaya/Yoruichi for that matter. anyway, as always great chapter and eagerly awaiting the next one.

I enjoyed this chapter, I am am am am so totally looking towards this YamaXNanao pairing this could get interesting. You should hav seen me rolling on the floor dying lauughing, when Kyo said he would ratherplunge into ice and Nanao. I'm still fucking laughing! I had tears flowing, ultimate insult.
I can kinda invision how Kyo feels guys like that reside at my school. It's all for o one girl too
O find it hilarious cause thry're too nice to tell her to fuck off, but when they do
she doens't listen anyway, so whateves. Their misery

This chapter was awesome, and I can tell something big's gonna happen in the next chpater, and this is only setting up fir it. The past few chapters have been setting up for a big event, and
I'm intersted in finding out how and if Toshiro and Soi are going to reunite and
how Mom is going to tie into all of this. I agree fullheartidly with OrionFan, about
the guys at her school, there are guys at my school like that too. I...I....I was
cryiign tooo, How can you say that you would rather fuck a block of ice than a woman
that is messed up. Looking forward to the next chapter. Are you gonna tie the
YamaXNano pairing into this story, or are they gonna get their own story or just a
mention in this one and that's the end. That is if you even do it..... I'm looking
forward to it though. You're always full of surprises.