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for For The Love of a Friend

by orionshadow

person kamiyoni
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WIN isn't an acronym. its just somthing people on the internet say when something is really really good, such as this story.
person K-Pilot
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is really good. It is well written and interesting. I hope you write more on it.
person mez
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
definately want more.
person kamiyoni
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok I'll rephrase that. Excellent story, very nicely done.
person misskiss
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love it! it made me laugh so much (i dont know why) especially when soi kept calling toshiro's manhood "thing". lol! great job!
person Chigirl
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it alot! Never seen a Hit/Soi pairing. Nice!
person kamiyoni
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pure WIN.
person Al
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was surprised at how much I liked this story. Usually the whole mystery other person theme is uninteresting to me, but you made it work. Your writing is excellent save for a few small grammatical errors which are of course not a big deal. This pairing has never occurred to me but it's actually not so implausible when presented like this. Thanks for the enjoyable read.
person vic
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was kind of sweet. You should add a second chapter