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really enjoyed your story  sorry that you did  not continue it

I hope you are continuing this, I'm an IchiHime lover but RenHime is my second favorite and this is an interesting story so far.

I've read it through and as a renxori writer (ff.net under a different name - beruhime219), I say your fic isn't bad. A few mistakes. Acceptable spelling for 'Zanpakuto'. Also, I hope I remember Orihime's sword name. Koku hana can be put together as Kokuhana or Koku-hana. Character manners are a little off. Byakuya is too OOC. Renji would never be that open with Kenpachi. I could see it with Ikkaku, but not with anyone else. I almost believe Renji and Ikkaku have more of a trust and brotherly type bond. I'm just saying this because it seems you want the characters to be true to the way they are in the manga, except Rukia. You needed a villain and she made the perfect fit. Someone who could make Orihime and Renji seek each other for comfort. Rukia was the most interesting part. You shouldn't have done the time skip so quick, you should have worked more on the plot. Orihime working hard only to have Rukia start sewing her seeds of revenge. Could have brought Ichigo back into it as well. Say, Orihime isn't over him, making Renji work harder to impress her. Rukia could have only had her name stripped and her rank. You could have made Orihime 3rd seat in squad 6. Rukia, in jealousy, plots against Orihime. Instead of Ichigo, Rukia could try to take Renji away too. She was written to be your basic jealous, center of attention, home-wrecker. It just seems you need to pace yourself while writing the plot and not dive head first into rushing just to get to the lemony bits.

This FF is amazing =) I love Renji Abari and I'm extremely happy that Rukia isn't a "good guy" character. Keep it up! I'd love to read more.

OMG!!Talk of cliff hanger...I'm dieing to know what happens next...how will it end...please let me know asap so as I can read the next chapter.

Hey. I love the story so far. Please write more.

Very nice. I really enjoyed this story so far and hope you continue.

I love it. I know we talked on the phone but I'm glad Sado is there, not she won't be so completely alone even though she has shinigami friends. Things are bound to get interesting but I also like how you still managed to keep her in character only she's more mature. Good job! *two thumbs up*

This is a great fic, I'm so glad to see that you've updated it! The only thing I'm confused about is why you keep saying that Ichigo hurt her. Unless I misread, I thought it was all Rukia - she cast a spell on Ichigo to make him do the things he did, right? I thought Ichigo cared about her but decided to back off once she died. In any case, I'd like to see what happens to him. Thanks again for updating!

I love the newest chapter, sis.
I knew he would most likely be the one who would come there. :-)