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for Maar Daala

by PieldeLava

person Vera
schedule November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I absolutely love it! Especially if Ichigo proves to her that he was not interested in Inoue (as a girlfriend). He definitely should steal her from these people, called "family"!!! And so that only the beloved Nii-sama knowing, where his sister is hidden.
person Anon
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hm, interesting concept, definitely hoping you continue this.
Ah, the title brings back fond memories of Devdas.
And I cant helo but think Rukia would be a beautiful Paro and Orihime would make a lovely Chandermuki.
person Luu
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I'm not much of a RukiaxIchigo girl, but I had to comment on the title! DEVDAS FOR THE WIN!!!!
person Clarity
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoa....This really makes me sad. It's totally awesome though. I hope you keep on with it though. I do have to say though that if you left it off here it would be pretty freaking awesome too. Leaves us to ponder what happens.
person serandipity
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. Amazing source of angst. One of the very few that I've encountered that are so well written.
person eilowyn
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good start - perfect Rukia angst really hits the spot! Oh, and what does Maar Daala mean?