rate_review Reviews

Oh my god i love this fic, perfect!

Okay here's the thing, I had this really in-depth speach about why I like and dis-like this story. But my stupid computer (coupled with my [i]extremely[/i] stupid fingers) made the whole damn thing go away.
So here is the alternate ... I despise whole-heartedly the thought that Rukia would ever [i]drawn[/i] to anyone besides Ichigo, especially Renji.
I do, however, enjoy your style of writting and the way you've set it out, (seriously, the first 3 chapters are tear-jerk worthy when reading while listening to 'Foolish Games' *which I was*)
And while I detest the very idea that Rukia's gettin it on with someone else I do like this fic, and will endure through the disgusting images of her and Renji, if only to get to the IchiRuki "goodness" that I hope will come.

Ja ne

It's good to know there are still fellow Moonlighters out there years after
the series ended. I was in my teenage years when it came on TV, for the record.

I was wondering how close to the TV series plot you were going to do, for a second, I
thought you were going to make Rukia...you know...what happened to Maddie in the
series. I'm glad you didn't, I wouldn't want to read an EXACT replica of something
else.

All in all, I enjoyed this.

I really lioked it because it sounded alot like them. Although i never saw rukia liking renji as anything but a brother type. it was still believable. you did good.

Honestly? I loved it... right up to the end - which sucked. I don't say that lightly, I REALLY liked your story, until you decided to have Ichigo go completely OOC. The ending was such a let down, I don't think I could have devised a better way to ruin it for me.

I don't want you to take this the wrong way - you did an excellent job. I simply thought the ending couldn't be worse. Ichigo finally decides to become an asshole, and then Rukia decides that that's what she wants. Honestly...

Wow. Just wow

Excellent job with this story. I'm not going to be another "OMG GREAT JOB MOAR!" Though. I personally think authors deserve more than that. You got a little fruity in a few paragraphs there, making it sound kinda wierd-transposing words, and adding different ones in, but that was only in the unedited chapter. In the others, the only minor problems were minor spelling errors. Altogether, it was good. very good. The lemon in the end was enough to make me drowzy. And yes, that's a good thing. As any one of the authors who know me will tell you, making me drowzy requires talent. Sort of like making a grizzled veteran's heart flutter.

Continue on, Mon Ami!

I look foward to the new series. Great fic by the way :) keep up the great work.

BEAUTIFUL!
SEXY!
AROUSING!

i love how you portrayed ichigo when he was..licking rukia to be all "fuck, the way i imagined you"
perfect, a swearing, sexy, forceful ichigo.

PERFECT! keep writing, i want that side story!

Bringing a full-blown deep plot together, one that makes sense, and is believeable, in which Ichigo and Rukia finally get together, is a lot harder than it sounds. If only I could find a fic this good more often... If only.