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February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dude when are you going to update. I'm getting impacient want to read the story too badly.
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January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good story. A bit cliché at times, but still nice.
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January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Like the sex scene with Orihime and Ichigo. Just a few pointers. If your a guy I'm sure you watch porn. Real sex scenes and porn can't mix. Just doesn't feel right. put more fluff in it like where their teasing each other. Other then that the scene is great and I love reading a Orihime and Ichigo fuck scene. They should do that in the anime no lie
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January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Like the story. Keep it up. Honestly please do because a lot of stories are never finished and it just pisses me off. I swear that this is what the ending of the anime should really be like. Screw, if it's for younger teens its not like no ones seen porn.
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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
cool fic I like it keep up the good work :)
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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please update soon! great fic to be honest
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December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've been enjoying your story. A hollow/shinigami relationship is a bit hard to get you head around, but you make it work. I'm not a big fan of the Ichigo/Hime (I prefer Ichigo/Tatsuki) but I like the way you are writing their relationship, and look forward to see where you take it.
Good job and can't wait for more.
Good job and can't wait for more.
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December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
haven't seen many orihime/ichigo fics. this one is good. keep up the good writing. tho, the chapters could be a bit longer
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December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More chapters! Longer chapters! So little to do, so much time! Wait, reverse that! Exclamatory sentences will continue until my demands... er, demand is met! EXCLAMATION POINT!
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December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
niiiiiiiiiiiiiiicccceeeeeeeeeeee