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for Bleach Ficlet: Dare To Live

by greywitch

schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh god, i can "see" the lemon coming! heheehehheehhehe oh goody goody goody!!!*rubbing hands together* *evil grin*

go, ichigo, go!!!

~_^

schedule May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoop!! I love this story and can't wait for more!! WRITE MORE SOON!! (Please!?!)
person Afrieal
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear the menfolk are DOOOOOOOOOMMMEEDDD!!! Karin is bad enough but add Yuzu into the mix and
you have a serious Oh Shi@ situation (grin) keep up the great work while i drag Aff back to work on
her stuff

Rysha and Affie
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello Irondog,
this is the first fic of yours that I have read in AFF, I first came across your works at Boysnextdoor, where I read Lewd lessons and Sharp and guilty pleasure. That was over two and a half yrs ago.
I also went to your web page and read BBE.
Last week I read a fic on AFF, and the author mentioned reading something of yours on AFF, I was so happy when I got to your LJ and found more recent postings of my favorite Arcs of yours. This week I also read Lost Cadre and can't wait to read more, I hope you update it soon. (and your WK, Sayuki and Bleach fics too.)

so I've been a fan for almost three yrs and it was time I introduced myself to you;
My name is Robyn and I live in Australia, I'm 36 yrs old and I've only discovered yaoi four yrs ago and fanfiction only three yrs ago.

You, Nekojita, Miko no da, Hestia and Neko Izumi are my favorites fan fic authors.

Anyway, this was a great continuation to Lewd lessons and would love to read more.

Love Always and forever
Robyn.
person Ikippiki
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW I'm soooooooo a fan of yours!!
You changed my way of seeing aya/shu/yohji and now my way of seeing bleach caracters! I really like the way you write and your fics are always soo original!!
Continue the good work!
person Word_Slave
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, I really like this fic. It's imaginative, funny and actually kind of touching in parts! I only have one suggestion... you might change the description on the story.... you'd get more hits, I think. But who knows. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Slave
schedule April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wondered when you were going to follow up that idea. Yet another well written, very hot chapter, and remember, I don't normally praise yaoi, but for you I'll make an exception.

Look forward to the next chapter.
person Anon
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dear Doggie

I'm usually too lazy to review fanfics, but yours was so good that I just could not help but write a review. The language of the fic is very good (no typos, no mistakes - say thanks to your beta! There far too many fics with bad language on the web).

The characters are, well, in character - I am absolutely amazed how you manage to describe absolutely different personalities in an absolutely convincing way (I particularly like the way you describe Shirosaki - he is so sex-obsessed it makes me laugh). Additional kudos for writing about Nova - I haven't seen any other fics about him, and he deserves some attention =)

Thank you for writing such a great story (rather, a collection of stories)!!! I am looking forward to new chapters.

BTW, I have looked at your LJ page and I have to say I really like your taste in music - you mention Rotersand and VNV Nation, and I *love* electronic music, so now I think you are above the level of usual mortals: you write great fics and you listen to good music other people usually don't appreciate =))
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The twist is good. I agree, never thought of Hisagi doing embroidery. Nice work, as always.
person Anon
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent Story. I have highly enjoyed it. I look forward to the next chapter!