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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW i love the flow of your story! it's very well done!
the child in Hitsu is showing and i think that's just sooo cute! (^o^)! he grew up too fast and now's a chance for him to put down that mask and actually become a man!
i hope you continue with this!
xoxoxoxo
the child in Hitsu is showing and i think that's just sooo cute! (^o^)! he grew up too fast and now's a chance for him to put down that mask and actually become a man!
i hope you continue with this!
xoxoxoxo
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This, possibly, is one of the most attention grabbing fanfictions I have read. I, being a fond fan of yours, had waited quite a while for you to update. I was thoroughly excited to see that you had not forgotten about this story. Because I couldn't if I had a lifetime. I am impressed how you kept the character's personalities in tact, and then able to create a stunning 'love-hate' relationship between Hitsugaya and Gin so...incredibly fresh. I hope the new chapter comes soon, and I give you luck with your other works as well.
Signed:
Em, October 26th
Signed:
Em, October 26th
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October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hot off the presses, and quite the play this turned out to be. With the mention of Othello, I was caught, but even before it was a refreshing note to see an update, and a good one at that. And trust you I, time management is one of the most difficult parts of college, so when you say you're pressed for time, I take it well to heart. Until your next chapter, and the climatic conclusion...because all of our thoughts are on just what Aizen intends to do to, or with, the 'Desdemona' of this act.
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October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, an update!
Oh, this certainly was a wonderful thing to wake up to.
You've got a few minor spelling mistakes, here and there. Most noticeable was Ichimaru's “Is there something you need, Ulquiorra-kun?”, and the last line as well.
She just thought she'd point them out, but, as usual she cannot find one genuine critique for this fiction. This is one of the most enjoyable things she's read in a very, very long time.
She hopes you can update soon.
Oh, this certainly was a wonderful thing to wake up to.
You've got a few minor spelling mistakes, here and there. Most noticeable was Ichimaru's “Is there something you need, Ulquiorra-kun?”, and the last line as well.
She just thought she'd point them out, but, as usual she cannot find one genuine critique for this fiction. This is one of the most enjoyable things she's read in a very, very long time.
She hopes you can update soon.
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October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Write more, and soon! This is absolutely amazing. One of my favorite pairings, and written so well. Their interactions are hot, and not totally OOC. I also have to admit a certain fondness for fics that write Gin's dialogue like the fansubs do. :D Keep up the amazing work!
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October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
looove it!!! please write more soon
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October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a beautifly written story, I sincerely hope you continue it soon!
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September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my god this story is so amazing i absolutely love it please please please type more
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September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
absolutely amazing story i just felt i had to tell you how great of a writer you are i trely envy you
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September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!!!!! update soon, please