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June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
make me hot and bothered! please! god... i'm getting all giddy now!
i'd give u my brain if i could just so u can fill it up with ur epiclemonsauce!
you had gan and hitsu grinding like...PERFECTLY... usually i'd read WHAM BAM and then SEX SEX SEX
but for you it's like "... you feel that?...well you cant have it...yet..."
and everythings sexual attaction SO TENSE yet the chem and physics are SO SMOOTH! ARGH! my mind is urs to do as u please! just update more! YOU ARE FANTASTIC!
i'd give u my brain if i could just so u can fill it up with ur epiclemonsauce!
you had gan and hitsu grinding like...PERFECTLY... usually i'd read WHAM BAM and then SEX SEX SEX
but for you it's like "... you feel that?...well you cant have it...yet..."
and everythings sexual attaction SO TENSE yet the chem and physics are SO SMOOTH! ARGH! my mind is urs to do as u please! just update more! YOU ARE FANTASTIC!
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June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Also..I'd love to know if your actually getting my full review..If not..Email me your email and I'll email my full review because I have it saved. When I look on the review page I can't see all of it.
-Cata
-Cata
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June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is one of the best bleach fics ive ever read i cant wait for the next update. Please dont keep us hanging to long.
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June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes. Things are coming to a head indeed.
There's really no way of getting around it. Ichimaru is a sneaky, manipulative rat fink; no matter how often he does what he does, it never ceases to amaze me at how good he is at it. Everything about him is multi-layered, more than meets the eye and there's always something deeper than what you see on the surface. He knows what he wants and will get it, but why not have fun along the way?
In contrast, Hitsugaya has spent most of his time trying to be older, more mature than he is. He puts up a strong shell around himself, but once that shell is broken we see the child within, the insecurity, confusion, all ripe for a character like Ichimaru to take advantage of, to play with as a cat might a ball of yarn, or its prey.
Hitsugaya is fighting a losing battle, and I think, once he's made that precise realization - he's very, very close now - he's going to do everything in his power to fight it, but inevitably he shall fail. I think it will be that conflict, if I might be so presumptuous, that will finish the definitions you've written here. Regardless of the end result, it will be as well-worth watching as any chapter you've put together hence, perhaps more so for the symbolism it shall entail.
I can't wait to see what happens next.
There's really no way of getting around it. Ichimaru is a sneaky, manipulative rat fink; no matter how often he does what he does, it never ceases to amaze me at how good he is at it. Everything about him is multi-layered, more than meets the eye and there's always something deeper than what you see on the surface. He knows what he wants and will get it, but why not have fun along the way?
In contrast, Hitsugaya has spent most of his time trying to be older, more mature than he is. He puts up a strong shell around himself, but once that shell is broken we see the child within, the insecurity, confusion, all ripe for a character like Ichimaru to take advantage of, to play with as a cat might a ball of yarn, or its prey.
Hitsugaya is fighting a losing battle, and I think, once he's made that precise realization - he's very, very close now - he's going to do everything in his power to fight it, but inevitably he shall fail. I think it will be that conflict, if I might be so presumptuous, that will finish the definitions you've written here. Regardless of the end result, it will be as well-worth watching as any chapter you've put together hence, perhaps more so for the symbolism it shall entail.
I can't wait to see what happens next.
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June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your story even more! I don't care about the back story anymore, just write more of this.
YAY! I love how you write the characters and I really cant wait for more!
YAY! I love how you write the characters and I really cant wait for more!
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June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
In a way, I am very glad I put off reading this story. I hadn't caught up in the manga yet, so I figured, ohnono, that says Hueco Mundo, I can't read that! I still read the first two chapters and was delighted at the coherence of thought, the actual exploration into what they're thinking. The description of Ichimaru and the way he thinks seems to be so constantly and irrepresibly accurate. So I'm finally caught up in the manga, and I read through. Hitsugaya's reactions and thoughts are powerful enough to make me shiver a little, I almost wonder if there's something in his past that has made him this way? He almost acts like a rape victim, yet he isn't. That we know of? I could almost see it explaining his character both in the series and how you have envisioned him. As you can see, I'm enjoying the story. Oh, on a side note, I think you mentioned when replying to reviews that someone called you a tease...
YOU TOTALLY ARE! Come on, I read all eight chapters at once and you leave me with that? You bitch! ;_; Okay, so I might have done the same thing in my own fic for several chapters, but come on now... Update soon. :(
YOU TOTALLY ARE! Come on, I read all eight chapters at once and you leave me with that? You bitch! ;_; Okay, so I might have done the same thing in my own fic for several chapters, but come on now... Update soon. :(
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June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes! you just set my imagination of fire with this chapter! Yea you were true to your word did were doing more than just kissing. It's almost like and elevator each level is high then the next haha if that makes any sense at all. You are and amazing author I'm so glad you are still update!
Monica
Monica
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June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Finally, an update!!!!
*Hearts*
Is it sad that she checked for this nearly every day?
*Hearts*
Is it sad that she checked for this nearly every day?
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June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is fucking fantastic...and that last chapter *fans herself* phew, so hot...I just love it when Hitsugaya is so confused and totally overwhelmned by the feelings for Ichimaru. Aren't I a sadistic bitch ^_^ I just love this story and I hope you will continue ASAP!
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June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hitsugaya, hehe... seriously I feel abit for bad for him, but it's way too much fun reading how Gin tease him all the times. Both with words and more physical.
You know, you write their thoughts and inner struggles very well. I think that's why this story becomes so real.
I absolutely love how sneaky Gin is. He is a bastard, but you gotta love him, anyway. Like I have said before, you're potraying him so damn good. It's wonderful to read.
And I cal only imagine how much read lines there is when Gin is talking ^^
You know, you write their thoughts and inner struggles very well. I think that's why this story becomes so real.
I absolutely love how sneaky Gin is. He is a bastard, but you gotta love him, anyway. Like I have said before, you're potraying him so damn good. It's wonderful to read.
And I cal only imagine how much read lines there is when Gin is talking ^^