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February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is the far best fan-fiction I have ever laid eyes on.
It was like watching a movie that's how well written your story is.
kept up the spectacular work!
love Monica-sama
It was like watching a movie that's how well written your story is.
kept up the spectacular work!
love Monica-sama
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January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
In all of the stories on adult fanfiction, I MUST say that this IS THE BEST!
You've captured the charachters absolutely perfectly, you've described whatever you wanted to describe MUCH better then 'normal' people do, and to be honest, your whole story is just f'ing great.
And that's only from a writers point of view.
As a Bleach fan, I can't help but agree (in the review replies) that there really should be a hinamori-hate-club, honestly, she's the worst short-bunned-bitch to be ever seen throughout the history of anime (actually, there might be worse...).
And Aizen truly is the Great One. And so are his quotes. XD
You've captured the charachters absolutely perfectly, you've described whatever you wanted to describe MUCH better then 'normal' people do, and to be honest, your whole story is just f'ing great.
And that's only from a writers point of view.
As a Bleach fan, I can't help but agree (in the review replies) that there really should be a hinamori-hate-club, honestly, she's the worst short-bunned-bitch to be ever seen throughout the history of anime (actually, there might be worse...).
And Aizen truly is the Great One. And so are his quotes. XD
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January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm. *smacks lips* Very, very good indeed. I like how you portrayed Gin. Instead of softening him as most people are want to do, you managed to keep every ounce of his character. And yes, Aizen is indeed an evil bastard. A deliciously evil bastard that deserves to rule the world, lol. Ahem, I have an affection for the evil ones.
In any case, I loved this chapter and was happy to be updating today only to notice that you had and I somehow missed it. In my defense, it is so rare to find anything of any worth on aff that I rarely check. So yes! I was happy when I saw an update and was I disappointed? Not hardly. In fact, this has only whetted my appetite for more. I eagerly anticipate the next part of what is shaping up to be a truly engaging piece. (You have inspired me to try writing something a bit more serious and I thank you.)
~Dracoqueen22~
In any case, I loved this chapter and was happy to be updating today only to notice that you had and I somehow missed it. In my defense, it is so rare to find anything of any worth on aff that I rarely check. So yes! I was happy when I saw an update and was I disappointed? Not hardly. In fact, this has only whetted my appetite for more. I eagerly anticipate the next part of what is shaping up to be a truly engaging piece. (You have inspired me to try writing something a bit more serious and I thank you.)
~Dracoqueen22~
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January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! god your story is so awesome! ugh, you are gonna have to update quickly or I might start to have withdraws you are and amazing author ;)
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January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
-fan girl squeal- Once more..LOVED IT! Well of course I loved it..You wrote it..lol. Anyways..Love the fact people are staying in character. More of a turn on in my opinion when people aren't suddenly like "I love you!". -gags- Crap pisses me off. Anyways. Keep up the good work darling. And like I said..Hit me up on msn messenger.
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Catarotta
Love
Catarotta
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January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ichimaru, playing well his many faces, must be a fascinating character to write. One second you think he's being gentle, the next he's got you completely confused. Off-balance. Always setting up for the next move, always playing with his cards very close to the vest. Ah, poor Toshiro. His innocence against Gin's slyfulness...that's a rigged matched, wouldn't you say? And yet, it will never cease to keep the breath bidden for the next move. One might even compare it to professional poker, but with much more at stake. The victory in this scenario, however, wouldn't be Gin forcing the victory into his hands, no no. That'd be too simple. He'd have to enjoy every moment of winding Toshiro into his hands, playing against his fears, his strengths, his very mind. All to take that innocence, wrapped up in a pretty package, and win it through by trick and sleight of hand. A war of attrition, fought in the shadow...the best kind of battle, because you'll never see the next move until it's too late...the next move is Toshiro's, I believe. I wonder...does the boy of fair eyes and sullen disposition have a few tricks of his own to play against his captors?
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January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
damn, I really enjoy ths story. Your Ichimaru is just the perfect combination between cruel and not so cruel, almost nice. I really love it.
can't wait for the next chapter.
can't wait for the next chapter.
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January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely love your portrayal of Gin and Hitsugaya's character. I am soo looking forward to the next chapter, until then keep up the wonderful work!!
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January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes yes..-nods- I'm very hooked to this. My poor Toushiro! Being stripped like that. But damn I would do it to -laughs- Another fabulous chapter my dear. Can't wait for the next. Hit me up on msn messenger if you want. Phoenixheiress666@yahoo.com I'm usually on in the evenings. Would love to chat. And Rping..Oh man you'd love it. -winks- I'm show you the ropes.
Love
Catarotta
Love
Catarotta
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January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh please update! I can't wait to see what happens to him next..so far this is really interesting..and i really want to know more..so keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to your next update! 8D