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for Sinner

by TillThatTime

person Catarotta
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You! -ties up till and put her in the naughty cliffy hanger author closet- You..You bad bad bad bad girl ><. I fell out of my computer chair screaming 'Nuuu!' because of that cliffy. -tears up and whimpers- I feel..SO betrayed..lol. Anyways. Awesome chapter babe. As always I'm always looking out for your story. Keep up the good work..Also..Its awesome that your mom reads your smut..
person satterb
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Go Mom! Thanks for getting such a wonderful Mothers Day gift....cause we get to enjoy it too! Oh! How long are you going to make us wait for little Shiro-Chan to get some of that hot, kinky, smutty-mouthed Ichimaru lovin???? It was a brilliant manuver to have Ichimaru tell Toshiro that he was hurting. How marvelous. And I thought the characterizations were perfect. Of course it would be a little angsty! Aizen totally shook Ichimarus foundations by exposing his innermost thoughts about the whole situation. Thanks again for updating this. I almost peed my pants when I saw it listed! Yay you!
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The flower blossoms, the fruit ripens, and the boy who cried wolf is on his way to becoming dogfood. I wonder...d'ya think Ichimaru's the kinda guy who, when he has sex, wants to see his victim's face, watching every reaction to his ministrations? Perhaps he teases and first and then tosses 'em on their stomach, dominating from behind? One might even go as far as saying he would prefer bondage, blindfolds and all, slow torture with enhanced sensual pleasure.

My heart to poor Toshiro if he fits into one or more of those categories.
person rowenstar
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I wish every day was mothers day if I could read something this good! Thank you! I can't wait for the next chapter! I really can't wait. Thank you!!!!
person ChibiBerry
schedule April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww no, I feel so sad for Gin. This chapter really showed his characters and how he feels and everything. I love it!! Thanks so much for the update, I'mm looking forward to yoru next chapter. 8D
person Name
schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
TTT~!!!! :D you're back! i've been waiting for you! teehee

OMGOSH GIN!!!! EMOTIONSS!! *starts playing emotions by beegees* that was such a hyped up chapter! the tension was crazy.. D:
Aizen is a jerkface! xD too bad chibi didnt show up in this chappieeeee! oh well... all the more for ur next update. heh heh..

I'LL BE WAITING~!!
xoxoxoxo
person rowenstar
schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*cry* another cliffhanger. You are great! I can't wait for the next chapter. Hitsu/gin is hot and you write them so well. I really hope gin kicks aizen's ass. No one puts gin down like that -.- keep it up and thank you
person Monica
schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was on the edge of my seat the whole time... Thanks for uploading another nail biting chapter.
Monica
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm not happy with the Ulq situation either. Between that, anatomy class, and POLLEN (stabs allergies) I can barely function. I am happy, however, with this latest chapter. Such a shame to be used and then thrown away. I think Aizen was pulling Gin's leg a bit. Ichimaru isn't as expendable as he thinks. Aizen should watch his words, because the worst enemies you could ever have are the ones that used to be your close friends.
person kris
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this story gets better an better. you are a really good writer. cant wait for the next chapter.

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