rate_review Reviews

This is a really good story, I enjoyed it a lot :) Just finished chapter three at the moment; it was hard to get into four as for some reason your format has gone a little off with punctuation marks, for example - ¡§Yow!¡¨ yelped Ichigo - but as I said it's a great story, it's a very original pairing and I like how you kept Ichigo so in character and so interesting! I'll have to go read the rest now ;)

Seems like a nice cute story. Not sure about Rukia being that murderous in a kind of hyper way.
Looking forward to the rest. But it's been a year since you've updated, hope you haven't given up.

Kool!! ^^ I love this story!! :D So cute!! And different!! :3 WRITE MORE SOON PLEASE!!

awsome sause this was great yeeeeeeeeeee

your a cruel, cruel person you know that. i think the only thing that could improve this story is if you made the chapters alittle longer. other wise i think its perfect.

your a cruel, cruel person you know that. i think the only thing that could improve this story is if you made the chapters alittle longer. other wise i think its perfect.

*grins* evilly wonders how everyones going to act if they hear ichi calling yumichika 'yumi.' Dunno whether it was my comment that inspired or the story was heading there anyway but either ways woot! would have though ichigo would have guessed matsumoto though then again the poor boy is a little dense about these things. I love where this is going and noticed how yumi carefully agreed he would attck him while he sleeps but said nothing about when he's awake. *Mentally distracted by a yumi interrupting shower scene* Thanks for the update even if it has evil cliffhangyness.

I think this story is marvelously funny I like the light weight and feel of it, at the same time I find myself very curious as to or if there will be smut how that's going to happen. Yumichika is incredibly funny in this story and practically spot on.

Byakuya should definitely be gay and should definitely go after Ichigo's ass! Shuuhei, Ukitake-taichou, Shunsui-taichou, ummm... Renji! Definitely Renji! They should be gay!

Lovely chap... Although I got quite confused with those symbols...

hehehe oh this is brilliant. more more please more. would love to have a bi ichigo who likes rukia a bit but she's on THE LIST and a great reaction to that.i don't check the bleach fics often but i get the feeling until this is finished i might just have to visit a little more often. Oh and i'd love to hear Ichigo call yumichika yumi cause yumi is definantly a more beautiful name than chika. anyways i'm blathering. can't wait for the update