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so hot that was so hot update soon please

omg... i love you to death right now D:

I love this story! Probably the best ichi/grimm that I have read!!!!! Keep on updating!

im doing happy dances right now :) Very hot, very good.

....*nosebleed* that was AMAAAZING

You...you tease! Gah, I hate it when authors write chapters like this and leave the readers hanging. I mean, I know it's necessary in order to hook the readers sometimes, but without the next chapter? Aww, man...

I can't really give you anything to work with--currently, I'm waiting for the chapter when Ichigo and Ishida go back to the club and Ichi meets up with that one boy (forgot his name, sorry), and then GRIMMJOW finds out... Hoi, that'll be interesting. Also, I have to commend you on your brilliant fight between Renji and Grimmjow--and the way Rukia handled it. Hey, at least the two hot-heads agree on something.

I've been reading this for a while now, sorry that I didn't leave a review. Last time I tried the site said that I needed to be a member. Oh well.

Update soon, and don't leave me hanging, please!

I have never really found a fic that I felt inspired to write a review for, so I must say that this is a first for me. I began with the intention of writing a simple paragraph summarizing my love for your work, but it turned into about two pages worth of review. I'm afraid that I can't post the entire thing without it being cut off and I feel it might be too long to break into multiple review posts. I then thought about emailing it to you, but alas, your email is hidden. I'm not sure what else to do.

Perhaps you can email me and then I can simply send you my whole review. That way your email remains confidential and I still get to show my love for your amazing fic.

So if you read this, and feel like you'd want to hear what lil' ol' me has to say, then email me away. :)

AND THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR ALL THE EFFORT YOU PUT INTO THIS ASTOUNDING PIECE OF WORK!

Shinigami like apples. kukuku.

Apparently hollows do too :P

lol I apologize if my inane deathnote reference isn't understood ^_^; Great story! I love how you write Grimmjow, especially his way of interacting with Ichigo. Too cute! :) Please update soon!

I don't really like Grimmjow wanting to fuck anything thats hot, but other than that its a great chapter.

Although admittedly not as long as the last one, I still enjoyed this chapter, love! It started out pretty amusing (Grimmjow and Renji bickering; hilarious!), but it switched to serious just at the end. Poor Ichigo! I can't imagine how confused he must be feeling! But hey, the vizards made their first appearance! As for suggestions...Hmmm, whatever happened to that dancer that gave Ichigo a blowqjob? I'm not saying he should be too involbed, but perhaps a short, chance meeting? Preferably in Renji or Grmmjow's presence (I so like to see them jealous and/or possessive!). And as for how involved should Renji be...It would be interesting to make Grimmjow sweat a bit. I mean, Renji is what I'd call Ichigo's oldest friend among the Shinigami besides Rukia. They (or at least Renji) should be pretty close in some aspects. I'd also really like to see Ichigo's vizard training as soon as possible. And I hope his inner Hollow makes an appearance again soon. His interaction (as violent and downright homocidal as it is) with Grimmjow is fascinating. But those are just ideas. I'm sure whatever you come up with will work out just fine! Kisses!