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for Angry at the World

by Gnat

person steisi
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love! You updated! And what an update it was! You have no idea how much I enjoyed this chapter. It kept me on my toes the entire time in the sense that it was full of controversial moods. One moment Grimmjow is goofing around and the tension is easing from Ichigo's shoulders, the next we're dealing with some heavy duty drama (in my opinion, anyway). And it was all so masterfully mixed together! Great work, hon. And we got to see some of Ichigo's fears come into the open, if only in the privacy of his own thoughts or Grimmjow's presence. I'm more than pleased to hear you've gotten over whatever your writer's block had been, and I sincerely hope we get to read more of this soon! Kisses from your loyal fan!
person Hizoku
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is freakin fantastic! It's very well written as well as being an extremely interesting take on a Grimm/Ichigo relationship. I love =D
person Dundun
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love you.
person steisi
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey there! It was great to hear from you again, love. It wasn't an awfully long chapter, you were right about that, but I emjoyed it immensely nonetheless. It was so much fun watching Grimmjow's interaction with the real world. And he and Ichigo really are alike in many of their mannerisms, aren't they? The last few paragraphs depicting the scene with Renji were especially interesting though. Ichigo's reaction at the mention of the rape...Looks like he's got plenty of unresolved issues concerning that, eh? Wonder what'll happen when they come to ligtt. And I can't wait to see Grimmjow's reaction when he finds out that he isn't the only one interested in Ichigo. I'm really looking forward to the next update, hon, and hope you post sometime soon! Kisses!
person Ashes
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think I'm in love. Both with a new pairing and with this story. I'll admit I had my doubts at the non-con warnings and during the first chapter. But I'm glad I decided to read on. 'Cause this story kicks major ass. X3
Your characterization of everyone is great and much of the banter between characters is natural sounding and makes me giggle quite a bit. X3 Even your original characters were tolerable. Not a single over perky mary sue to be seen! Woot! *cheers*
Please keep going with the story soon! I can't wait to read more.
...Just please, no m-preg. x.x
person Kaz
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
CONTINUEEE this is awesome. I love the twisted relationship between Grimmjow and Ichigo. Ichigo's so fragile, Grimm's the perfect pillar of strength for him... ha! More GrimmIchi smut please?
person Kagecat
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your story :3

you should write more :D
person lizzy00
schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your work! I read this fic really for the Grimm/Ichi action, but the added fluffiness is nice too (If you could call that kind of relationship fluffy). The banter is very natural between Grimmjow and Ichigo because I think it has to do with them being more enemies than friends. That will change as the story progresses I hope.

I hope to see more of your work in the future and good luck!
person michele
schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i know this is supposed to be a ichigo/grimm pairing but I kind of liked the vulnerbility and the awakening sensuality that ichigo experienced with the other guy, you wrote that really well, perhaps too well, because now I would like to see more of that pairing.
person steisi
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love! You updated! I am very, very pleased indeed. This chapter had me on my toes the entire time. Some people's reactions were quite interesting, and the banter you included had me at times in stitches, I was laughing so hard. Like the part where Ichigo seemed more worried whether or not Grimmjow had undressed him than Rukia's condition, or when they both agreed on Renji's irritation factor. And the ending! "Can't...It's a Kuchiki thing1."! Brilliant, love! Simply brilliant. You're right, by the way. The conversation between Ichigo and Grimmjow, as awkward as it was at times, flowed really well. Congratulations on that. You managed to keep them both surprisingly in character. I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter. Will Rukia's nightmarish prediction of Grimmjow going to school with them come true? Fufufu! I certainly hope so! A possessive, homocidal, not entirely sane Grimmjow in a regular high-school...Do I need to elaborate any further? Kisses, love!