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Another awesome chapter! Grimm is an asshole and a sweetheart at the same time, way to pull that off!

I LOVE THIS STORY. OMYGOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is the best, and I mean best, GrimmIchi story ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please keep writing and I'll be sure to read any and all of your other stories as well.

PS... I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wow!!! i read all 7 chapters in one go and im addicted!
.. to be honest i clicked on this mainly because of morbid curosity but i was both surprised and happy to find another a good bleach fic. :D yay!
you have amazing talent! looking fwd to your next chapter.

...I have no words to describe how exactly this chapter made me feel. I'll say that by the middle of it I was sobbing my little heart out and leacve it at that. Seeriously, love, I was so incredibly impressed by the debth and seriousness of this! You did an amazing job, congratulations. I have the feeling that this chapter was the stepping stone to a whole new level of Ichigo and Grimmjow's dysfunctional relationship. I'm very much looking forward to your next update, hon, and hope you keep up the same level of writing from now on. Once again, beautiful job! Kisses!

Interesting chapter! I think the kiss at the end was so much more sweet because it was on the forhead and therfore not as sexual.

I'm going through Grimmjow withdrawl in this story!!! Although that alley sex scene was HOT!!! Anything with Ichi in it is hot...as long as its with another male. I half thought that Grimm was going to come upon them and be PISSED! But that would be too much of a coincedence.

Hey, love! You updated much sooner than I'd thought you would, which I'm grateful and happy for! What got me was that I didn't guess correctly about this being a chapter from Grimmjow's perspective. *super-ultra-cute-miserable-pout* On the other hand, I think this was one hell of an awsome chapter! I wonder if we'll see Suzuki again? If nothing else, at least Grimmjow will get pissed! Anyway, about you trying to portray the women of Bleach in a more positive light. I think that's a wonderful direction for an author to go into, and you're doing a great job of it. I bet Rukia was just worried about Ichigo, thus the violence (though even I cringed at that below-the-waist blow, even though I'm a girl! Owie...). Hope you update again soon! Kisses!

Well, erm, what to say? That was rather sexy! *blushes* Really very sexy!
I truly love this story, and I look forward to seeing Ichigo's interactions with Grimmjow now. I love their twisted need for eachother, and I can't wait to see how it evolves.

Oh, and I like your A/Ns, by the way.

The only thing bad I have to say is that you may have gone over the top with the 'bitchy Rukia' at the end of this last chapter (chapter six). Because me, along with everyone else I've shown this fanfic to, just wanted to smack her upside the head. And most of us are serious Rukia fans.
But otherwise...
*explodes over the total awesomeness of the fanfic* KEEP IT UP YO! XD

~Anan

I wish I could love this story, because your writing is an iota above the rest, but I can't honestly endorse (or even comprehend of) a rape victim falling for his rapist. You've got a lot of good concepts going on here, and the sexual tension you've built up is envious, but your execution is terrible.

Also, I realize a number of the Bleach females are badly characterized or have poor roles, but your constant harping on them is really detracting from your story. Please leave fewer author's notes. I'm more interested in your story than your personal opinions, no offense; I read porn for porn, they shouldn't serve as the author's soap box.