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March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you keep up the frequent updates, love! Things are getting porgressively more intigueing with every chapter. I loved this! You were so right in getting Ishida to fall for someone that's such a polar opposite of him! Smitten-Uryu was just too amusing! And that small moment of interaction between Isshin and Ichigo at the beginning was a nice touch. A hint at the elder Kurosaki's more serious side. I'm looking forward to your next chapter. If I'm right, it should be in Grimmjow's perspective (that is, if I've caught on to your writing style). Keep up the awsome work, hon, and may your muse never leave you!...Or I'll hunt it down and drag it back kicking and screaming! Mwahahahaha!...Ahem. Don't mind my psychotic moment. It doesn't happen ALL that often. Anymore.
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March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really like this one. the way you have done grimmjaw is just marvelous and same with Renji. Plus i am a total sucker 4 a hurting Ichigo hope to read again from you soon.
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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think this should have some M-preg in it!^^ It would make it interesting, I love the way you have all the characters! There just like there self's, I REALLY love this fic, I hope you continue!
If you use my idea about the M-preg thing, could you have Ichigo give birth to a girl please!
If you use my idea about the M-preg thing, could you have Ichigo give birth to a girl please!
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March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just can't wait to read more. Please continue this! There's such a great dynamic between the two, and you've made their twisted relationship so beautiful. I love your little insights into Grimmjow's hate especially!
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I was practically glowing with happiness when I saw your update! I really enjoyed this, hon. Grimmjow's inner five year old...Hmmm...A chibi-Grimmjow...Now that's disturbing, in an amusing sort of way. You're right to not include smut for a little while longer. And while I'm sure Grimmjow will be working hard on getting his 'piece os ass', I know for a fact that Ichigo can be just as stubborn! The next few chapters will be more than a little entertaining, I'm sure. I really liked the scene with Grimmjow holding Ichigo. It may have been a little OOC to some people, but Grimmjow himself explained it. Nobody got to hurt Ichigo but him. By the way, love, you mentioned you like getting a lot of reviews. Well, I know that adultfanfiction.net readers don't review all that much. Why don't you post on fanfiction.net? It's got bigger archives, therefore more people visit and review! Kisses love!
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, teh fun-ness! I love this! Update plz!
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
zomg -dies- that was awsome yay i have been waiting for an update and i was like really bored so thank you for the great chapter i can't wait for the next one. Ja ne.
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love this story! It is amazing how you are pulling off the whole victim falling in love with the rapist thing, although it hasnt happened yet it is nicely set up!
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this, the way you write and the plot itself. XD Can't wait to read more!
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March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Honey! You updated! I was ecstatic! I really loved this chapter. It was nice to get a little insight of Grimmjow's thoughts on the whole matter. And the scene where he was scowling because nobody healed Ichigo's bruise...Someone's a little protective, if not possessive, eh? I guess nobody gets to hurt Ichigo but Grimmjow himself. Anyway, I'm looking forward to your next update. I agree with your decision to skip a few smut scenes for the sake of a story with a plot. I can't wait to see where you take this next! Kisses, love!