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i'm loving this!

Wow, this is now one of my favourite fics. Violent and upsetting, but sexy and beautiful with somehow more depth to it. The dialogue was ridiculously hot, and the whole thing was perfectly written.

Oh, this truly does look set to brilliant. You have a solid writing style, and this plot is looking fantastic! I can't wait to read more! I really think you are getting the characterisation beautifully too. This seems exactly how, if you could ever dig deep enough, the charcters would be inside. Really, really good job!

i was just wondering if your going to have ichigo and gimm fall in love and also if this is going to be an mpreg. it would be kinda funny to see ichigo pregnant.

great first 2 chaps

well im totally inlove with this fic
but with the flow of the story i expected ichigo to be more abrasive with his friends and not show his emotions to them concerning this incident, i thought he'd hide it even if they knew, even though im getting that ichigo's problem is that 'he ISNT strong all the time' it still FELT like that was how it would be from the buildup (i mean he hasnt said anything before now, but i guess thats part of the story, him breaking down and finally saying it but it felt soo i guess)
, i know they're supposed to be close but it just felt like
i dont know why but with every story i read i get into it so much that i can feel the feelings of the character you describe (if the story's well written which yours DEFINITELY is!) and it just seemed WRONG for the story not to go that way and when that happens i guess the emotional buildup/journey kinda falls flat(even if its just the early part of the story) and i have to wait before i can be interested again (usually by the next chapter coming out)
this doesnt mean i dont like the story!!! please dont take it that way its just a little criticism i guess, hope you're not mad! ^^
i like discussing the story with the authors, even if they dont write back lol

Oh, love! I had thought this was a oneshot! I can't tell you how happy I was when I saw I'd been wrong. You're doing amazing work there. It's really hard to write a good, in character Grimm/Ichigo pairing story, but you're doing one hell of an awsome job! I admit that I'm a sucker for a hurt Ichigo too, hehehe...Anyway, I can't wait to see where this goes next. I think the Renji/Ichigo hints are a wonderful touch, especially if they manage to bring out Grimmjow's more possessive side to the forefront. Hope you update again soon, hon! Kisses freon your newest fan!

Great story, great update!
Love the character-development in Ichigo, you're making him more grown up!
Love the care-taking versions of Urahara and Renji you have made!
Am relly looking forward to your continuation of this!
Well written and very well thought of!
Thanks so much for sharing this!
Lots of smiles from me!

YES! CONTINUATION! I LOVE this story, you won't believe how happy it made me to see a new chapter! Aug! See, and now I'm obsessed. greeeat. >>

Update soon!

You certainly DO know this pairing. Wow, I wish my Grimmjow/Ichigo could be as real as yours. But, I just have one piece of advice to give. In the first chapter, there are a few capitalization errors that could be worked on.

love it!! I hope you'll update soon ;)