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September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwww, That's so cute!! ^^ I love this story!! :D WRITE MORE SOON PLEASE!!
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September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhh I've lost track of how many times I've read this chapter now. I think I like this story so much I get impatient for new chapters... Please!!! Update soon!!!
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August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story- I hope you update soon!
-bribes with cupcakes-
-bribes with cupcakes-
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August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me that you're still going to keep updating, and that this isn't the last chapter!!!
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August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello. I've been an avid reader of your fanfic lately. I've just recently finished reading "The World Shakes". I just had to let you know that your story is one of the most well-written fanfics I've ever read. Seriously. You actually incorporate a mesmerizing plot mixed in the oh so yummy yaoiness. ^_^ Also, I think you capture the personalities of Grimmjow and Ichigo perfectly. Especially Grimmjow (Jesus, he's one sexy...) uh...anyway yea. You capture the characters well. I LOVE the way you portray Grimmjow. I'm usually reading your stories at laughing at the accuracy. It's so vulgar, but it wouldn't be Grimmjow if he wasn't vulgar or cocky. ^_^
I just have to say again, I LOVE your stories. I love how you don't try to change the characters (as one author tried to do with Byakuya...*shakes head* didn't work out too well in my opinion), and you actually add new plot lines while still staying on track with the actually Bleach story line. You are awesome. *bows* I worship you. LOL.
I just have to say again, I LOVE your stories. I love how you don't try to change the characters (as one author tried to do with Byakuya...*shakes head* didn't work out too well in my opinion), and you actually add new plot lines while still staying on track with the actually Bleach story line. You are awesome. *bows* I worship you. LOL.
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August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I pretty much adore the story, and I can actually buy the whole situation you have set up. Keep it up! :)
I have one tiny bit of advice though, just with the writing style. From time to time I find myself a little confused about who is saying what - usually it's pretty easy to work out, but it could be easier. (I would rather have it this way than 'he said' 'she said' every phrase they utter though, lol.)
I have one tiny bit of advice though, just with the writing style. From time to time I find myself a little confused about who is saying what - usually it's pretty easy to work out, but it could be easier. (I would rather have it this way than 'he said' 'she said' every phrase they utter though, lol.)
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok yea so! I just read and reviewed Revive Me. Didn't know that you were the same author. WOW! I absolutely love this fic and wait anxiously for an update. You are truly a gifted writer and you capture Grim and Ichi so well.
Can these two find a happy medium? If you can accomplish a "happy" ending I will be more than impressed. These two are like a twisted Romeo and Juliet - star crossed lovers. I guess that is the beauty of this pairing - passionate, intense, consuming, but fated!
Can these two find a happy medium? If you can accomplish a "happy" ending I will be more than impressed. These two are like a twisted Romeo and Juliet - star crossed lovers. I guess that is the beauty of this pairing - passionate, intense, consuming, but fated!
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July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello Love! I just thought I'd drop by and tell ya that this is the best multichapter Bleach fanfic I've found on the web. I'm not joking, for once Google and Fanfiction.net have failed me completely and I have found but one story that I'll check for updates. This is not to say I'm settling for your story, in fact, it's about one of the best emotional and characteristically correct fanfics I have ever seen! I love how you keep Ichigo strong and unbending and Grimmjow basically a nutcase. Here is the thing though, what makes this story great is the element of love, even if twisted, that you manage to capture in spite of the whole 'mortal enemies' situation. This isn't some quick fuck, as many other authors write, but a connection dwindling on obsession. Gnat, love, this story is quite an undertaking and thus far I give you tops marks in all categories. Keep up the good work!
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July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have been keeping track of this story for along time. This is one of the 3 stories that I constantly check for an update on. lol. I love how you have captured the emotion in this latest chapter. Please more I can't wait.
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thogh at first i though this fic will be nothing but a waste of time, you actually proved me wrong. I love this fic :) I love the way their love is developing and the last chapter was completely amazing :3