rate_review Reviews

I love fanfics that have an element of cannon events, that take the characters and tell their story without making them seem too OOC. You did that here, I can see you took some liberties with the storyline, but it still worked very well. I am very impressed with the way you wrote Ichigo and Grimm's relationship, you nailed Grimmjow's personality. And it was very interesting to see his softer side with Ichigo's siblings.

I really hope you continue this, I'm assuming you've read the manga so you'll have more information to work with as you progress through the chapters. Great Job, keep up the good work. =)

X3 i love this story :D please update with lots more

Awww... That was so much... it put me on the verge of tears... I had to stop reading for a moment and take a calm breath to stop them from coming out... hehe

But this chapter was amazing... not to say that the other ones wern't good but this was... out of this world...

You really now how to write Grimmjow, even though he's rash and such it's really cool how you can write him that way and softer as well... I don't know what I'm saying now... haha... but that was amazing...

Keep up the writting cause your really good at it and i'd be a waste of talent otherwise :P

im lovin this chapter. I like how the characters are so real and gritty. An how grimm is only gentle for ichigo!

I loved this chapter, it was bloody and sweet, just the way I like it!

This story really rocks! Soz that I'm only reviewing now - I'm a lazy cow lol! I feel for my Grimmjow, how dare that Yami bastard touch him! Hehe. Lov xxxx

... OMFG!!!
Chapter 20

I've been seeing this, and seeing this, and seeing it, and going, "I'll read it later" "I'll read it tomorrow." "I don't have time to read right now."

And then this morning I finally saw it at the top, and went, "FINE! I'LL READ IT NOW!"

And I'm so glad I did. O.O;

SO VERY GLAD. I was hooked in the first paragraph and it just KEPT. GETTING. BETTER. I was TOTALLY BLOWN AWAY. I embody 'we hurt the ones we love.' I don't know why ... but I enjoy my favourite characters suffering mass-angst.

And boy, you have delivered. I love Ichigo (especially YOUR Ichigo, which is as in character as he could possibly be under the circumstances) and I love that he's being beaten from all sides and still isn't falling. YOU MUST UPDATE THIS SOON!!! Consider me one of your biggest fans.

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Wow, that was a pretty intense chapter. I actually liked when Grimm got back what was coming to him. Karma's a bitch. xD And -gasp- Isshin does something fatherly and mature? Psh. Amazing. :D I can't wait for the next part.

Hi, love. Sorry I dodn't review your previous chapter; I didn't get the chance. I am especially awestruck by your latest update though. It was fun, and amusing, and sweet (you were SO right about Ichigo always looking awsome *drools excessively*). But that last part, the one from Grimmjow's perspective, almost made me cry. I don't know if it's because I'm overly emotional or because you just wrote it in such a goddamn touching manner or anything else, but it really moved me. It was so bittersweet...And about the previous chapter; Ichigo has gone to the Vizards. Wonder how differently you'll play things out. I'm especially anxious about Ichigo and Grimmjow's next meeting. Hope to get to read more soon, hon! Kisses!

I love this, don't stop!