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April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gnat-I applaud you for your unusual take on the relationship between Grimmjow and Ichigo. Rather that go for the shallow, submissive Ichigo-dominant Grimmjow you gave their relationship more substance by working in the anger that resides in both of them. I like the way that even after the AMAZING sex in chapter 14 their relationship is still an uphill battle. Chapter 15 was something I've never read before-wild, violent love between two strong personalities. Good job, no, EXCELLENT job!
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April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love you? Chapter 14 was incredible, exactly what I had been waiting/hoping for, but I’ll admit that I was a little bit worried that you were going to lose the edge that makes Grimm/Ichi so good (and keeps them IC)... you just totally proved my fears unfounded XD!!
This chapter was awesome, the calmness at the beginning just made the fight after, and the scene in the shower, all the more powerful.
Thank you.
This chapter was awesome, the calmness at the beginning just made the fight after, and the scene in the shower, all the more powerful.
Thank you.
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April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you are a GENIUS!
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April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GOOD GOD that's just... that's just fucking hot... *Is excessively drooling and nosebleeding*
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April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Let me see, how exactly do I want to begin this?...
Alright, I began seeing this story around the same time that I started putting up my own bleach fic. For awhile, each time I would bypass it, because I'm quite the lazy little bitch, and a GrimmIchi story needs to be really captivating for me to actually read it. The reason that I judged your fic without actually reading it is because I'm so used to being disappointed at the fanfiction world. However, eventually, I couldn't avoid it any longer and my curiosity got the better of me and I decided to actually open it. What a pleasant surprise. I've been reading it for a little while now and I haven't really be disappointed yet. I enjoy this fic because it doesn't just focus on the physical aspects of their relationship. I hate "let's fuck" fics, so the fact that there is some psychological meat to chew on is quite the refreshing treat.
I absolutely love the emotionally dark and complex layout of this story and all it has to offer. I am an admitted sucker for characters actually being IC, so the fact that you've kept them that way as much as the plot will allow is something that you should be congratulated on. I am only a fluff lover when the moment actually calls for it, angst and mental complexity are more my forte, so this fic is right up my alley.
I'm sorry if this review is needlessly long-winded, and not very coherent, but it isn't often that I actually write reviews. I just wanted to drop you a line and tell you that I'm quite captivated with your writing style and the story in general and I'm interested to see how it progresses further. This story actually makes me want to get up off, or rather on, my lazy ass and update my own story. Anyways, I anticipate your update. Thank you for your work.
TillThatTime
P.S. Did I mention Mr. Sexta Espada is one sexy bastard?
Alright, I began seeing this story around the same time that I started putting up my own bleach fic. For awhile, each time I would bypass it, because I'm quite the lazy little bitch, and a GrimmIchi story needs to be really captivating for me to actually read it. The reason that I judged your fic without actually reading it is because I'm so used to being disappointed at the fanfiction world. However, eventually, I couldn't avoid it any longer and my curiosity got the better of me and I decided to actually open it. What a pleasant surprise. I've been reading it for a little while now and I haven't really be disappointed yet. I enjoy this fic because it doesn't just focus on the physical aspects of their relationship. I hate "let's fuck" fics, so the fact that there is some psychological meat to chew on is quite the refreshing treat.
I absolutely love the emotionally dark and complex layout of this story and all it has to offer. I am an admitted sucker for characters actually being IC, so the fact that you've kept them that way as much as the plot will allow is something that you should be congratulated on. I am only a fluff lover when the moment actually calls for it, angst and mental complexity are more my forte, so this fic is right up my alley.
I'm sorry if this review is needlessly long-winded, and not very coherent, but it isn't often that I actually write reviews. I just wanted to drop you a line and tell you that I'm quite captivated with your writing style and the story in general and I'm interested to see how it progresses further. This story actually makes me want to get up off, or rather on, my lazy ass and update my own story. Anyways, I anticipate your update. Thank you for your work.
TillThatTime
P.S. Did I mention Mr. Sexta Espada is one sexy bastard?
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April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*dies* Omfg. OMFG. *bows down* You've done it. I love you.
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow..... I.. I'm speechless... That was too hot.
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14 is so far my favorite! SO hot!!! I wish gromm would stop commenting on how hot other ppl are though, it kinda ruins it for me.
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Im not ussually a fan of this pairing because they tend to be so dark. Except for the first couple of chapters your story has toned down some and is actually quite interesting. I like how in the anime and manga the arrancar seem to inhabit grey areas with enough of a code of honor to be sympathetic. Thanks for sharing this.
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love, I really have no idea how to begin this. Let me say frst that that three chapter update was the best present I could have wished for. I enjoyed it all immensely. A better look at Renji's mind, a meeting with Suzuki, the Vizards making their first appearance and offer to Ichigo, and, finally...Well the last chapter had one of the most intense and well written lemons I've ever come across. Congratulations on a job more than well done. I wonder what happened to Ishida though...Anyway, it doesn't matter how long I'll have to wait for the next update; it'll be more than worth it, I'll tell you this much. It would be nice to see the morning after through Grimmjow's eyes though. Ichigo's posessivness was certainly a pleasant surprise, by the way. I'll be looking forward to the day you decide to update again, whenever that may be! Kisses from you happy and sated (thouh still anxiously expectant) reviewer!
P.S.
I listened to Poets of the Fall's 'Carnival of Rust' while I read this. I strongly recommend you listen to it too, if you get the chance. I think it suits this story to a 't', but that's just me.
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I listened to Poets of the Fall's 'Carnival of Rust' while I read this. I strongly recommend you listen to it too, if you get the chance. I think it suits this story to a 't', but that's just me.