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for A Shadow of What Was

by katami

person Anon
schedule October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i am so glad to see an update on this story! i hope your life gets a lot less hectic soon.
person teena
schedule October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
JUST WANTED TO LET U KNO THAT iJUST FiNiSHED READiNG ALL THAT U HAVE OF THiS STORY N iTOTALLY LOVE iT!!!!!
PLZ UPDATE SOON!!!
schedule October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow...such a good and long story, I have to be sincere with you I begun to read this for Renji and Uryu, man I love that couple so much and I think you have done a terrific job on this, great story, congratulations, I just hope you update soon for know whats happen know ... and well have you think on any solition for Uryuu stop him of grown old...i what him for ever to be with Renji *sigh*

Akira
person Nelleh
schedule October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sweet gods, woman!

*delighted*

Yeah, got me hooked on your story now. But, I won't be bitching about you updating and whatnot. I'm pretty glad I found your fic and letting you know I'm in lust with Kitty and those über-romantic captains, ok? Oh, Urahara and Ichigo - damn, ALL the other pairings are tot. ok with me. It's _your_ story, do what you wish with it. I'm just into the ride, hon'.

So. Me in love with your storyteller-brain. *GRIN*

/goes away to find something coherent to say again/
person Irana
schedule October 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow... damn that hurt. *sighs* I keep hoping that those two can come to some sort of understanding, clear the air and get closer, but after this I don't think that'll ever happen. Ryuuken just doesn't see his own hypocrisy, has no clue what he's done to his son.

It's good to see another chapter from you hon. *hugs* Muses are fickle beings... they do what they will when they will. I have so many unfinished stories sitting on my machine because the muses won't talk it's ridiculous.
person KazeNoKaoru
schedule October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
F5 F5 F5 nuuuuuu there's no more!!! I finally get to the 87th chapter and then there's no more T-T Yes I am one of those one-shot readers and now I have become addicted. I really like all the odd pairings you have. I mean I would never have thought of Shunsui/Ukitake/Grimmjow but omg does it work *is craving more* and then the ByaUlqui is to die for. Of course I love the UraIchi pairing (it is why i started reading this monster in the first place) well i hope life allows you to write more because i know all too well how life can prevent you from writing anything. Till the next chappie!
person Erin
schedule September 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've spent the past few days reading this every spare second I had. I'm totally addicted! The basic premise was good, but with all the sub-plots going on added to it, It's a story that sucks you in and doesn't let go. I love how Renji and Uryuu are so shamelessly exhibitionist; so in love with each other that they don't care who sees them doing what so long as they have each other. I think Grimmjow's storyline is my current favorite. Abused, tortured, deprived, and now the poor kitty doesn't have a clue how to deal with people who care about and for him. It's so sad! And yet, once he learns how to trust a bit, I'm not sure I'll be able to take how hot that scene will be.

I really love what you've done with Urahara and his rebirth. The problems he has are not easily solved and I like how you're taking so much time working through them. (The angst fest is awesome, too.)

Every character has deep issues to address, wounds to their hearts and souls, before they can find complete happiness, and its fun watching it all happen.

Looking forward to the next chapter (and hopefully more Grimmjow).
person Lamboluver
schedule September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank god!!!!!!! You finally updated. I thoght you would never post another chapter again. Thank you thank you thank you thank you this chapter was awesome.
person ferlerrr
schedule September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my God! A new chapter! *sobs in happiness* I couldn't say how glad I am to be able to read a new chapter of your story. I had been waiting and re-reading it and wondering whether I should give up on continuation or not... but I was stubborn and I checked it almost in every two days. I was sure you would have told us if there wasn't chance in continuation. What can I say? If I must, I will wait years. (But I would prefer not... :-S )

I'm so eager to know what is going to be happen. I barely manage myself restrain my thoughts about the possibilities. Oh, I'm so excitied. There will be two dates at 6... and the Ishidas' relationship is in ruins now. I hope so much Uryuu won't be angry at Renji too much... .And there are the other plot-lines, Byakuya, the threesome... I'm really excitied XD

This was a very tensed chapter. I hope Ryuuken and Uryuu can repair their relationship in the future... I would like to see the strip-poker Isshin imagined a few chapters before ;-P

I am so sorry your life is a mess, but be strong and let it been solved. You are wonderful writer and have a wonderful story to tell. Don't let anything mess it up. :-)

And thank you, thank you. You made my entire week!

Best wishes,
Ferler
person PeaKay
schedule September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks, thanks, and thanks again. Loved the fight between father and son or rather the reason behind the fight. Wonder how Rukia's dear sweet and kind brother is going to react? Thank you again for the up date :)