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for A Shadow of What Was

by katami

person meshala101
schedule January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you're heartless. where's the update? finally a revelation after 82 chapters poor ichigo needs to be put out of his misery and we need some hot ichigo and kisuke reunion sex aka smut lol please more, now, right now!
person Moopi
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOO I hope you continue soon. I'd really like to know what happened to Grimmy~ D: Poor Kitty.
I hope Kisuke and Ichigo patch things up soon. There's some serious Aizen!Ass kicking to be done.
And Gin...D: SAVE HIM!!! DDDDD:

Anyways, love the story so far! xD
person Anon
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww this is such a cute story. I can't wait for ki-kun to make that call. *roots to kisuke* go get ur man boy! And I hope Bya-chan and Uli-chan make up soon too. I pray for the day Aizen crosses paths with Jyu-kun and Shu-kun too. And I would just like to take a minute out to thank u on Ru-chan's behalf. With the majority or the fanfics I see always mention Ru-chan cheering Ichi-chan on I thought she would NEVER get some ass! *roots for Ru-chan* go get a stiff one from ur stiff man! Love the story and looking forward to the next chapter! (PS. Its actually not that bad reading it at once. It took me 3 days and I'm on a sidekick too! Lol)
person Afrieal
schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*doing happy nerd dance and tripping over cats* YAHOO!! You're doing a great job with Intigration...It's nice to your ideas take flight. I'm impressed with your delicate touch with the angst as well. It's nice to see an author that can finely tune it so well. Thank you for such a wonderful update.

Rysha and Affie (who is now cussing out the other member of the household that let a cat out so she has to chase it in the snow...oh well he's a black cat how hard will it be to find him in a foot of snow?)

HAPPY HOLIDAYS!
person Conjure Lass
schedule December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Though I have never reviewed this story in the past, I would like to tell you that I HAVE been reading it right from the beginning! It seems we're getting closer to our ending, aren't we? *smile* Have a wonderful holiday, and we will speak more in the new year! :)

Loves,

K
person PeaKay
schedule December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thx a ton for the great chapters, both 81 & 82! Give the Muse a hug and yourself for doing such a great story! Hope your Holiday is a safe, happy, and fun one :) ... really wondering now over Grim's part and the up coming meeting of Ichigo and Kisuke part. Oh, the other parts are loved too so no fussing from me in any way! You really are doing a wonderful story and your work is well loved. Thanks, PeaKay :)
person Anon
schedule December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i'm afraid that kisuke is going to call just to find out that ichigo is a shell... UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!! i need to see what happens!!
ASOTA
person Irana
schedule December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*grins* I really liked this. I especially enjoyed the reference to all their time in Soul Society as subordinate and commander. Nice touch that.

He wasn't exactly the Urahara Kisuke who had fallen in love with Kurosaki Ichigo, but he was a part of him, just like the Captain and Hat-n-Clogs were a part of him Three parts of one whole. It was such a simple realization, but it made things so easy, swept away the doubts and confusion and left only calm certainty. Okay. I admit it. I cried. That's one hell of a Christmas pressie.
person Afrieal
schedule December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
poor grimmy you've got a great handle on him and i love your take on him in your universe please keep the updates coming.

Happy Holidays!!

Affie
person Irana
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The human was his! His kitten! His pride mate! His! And he held onto what was his. No one stole from Grimmjow Jeagerjaques! Not anymore! Not without paying for it in blood and pain. There was very little twenty years with Aizen had left him with beyond his rage; but now he had this - a pride mate, of sorts. And he would not loose it! He had lost enough! Oh gods. Christ, poor Kitty.

For once he was going to get some answers, he decided. Oh boy. Something tells me what he finds won't be exactly what he expects. Here's hoping he doesn't run across Jyuu and Shun while they're still pissed off about what was done to him in Las Noches.