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for A Shadow of What Was

by katami

person Irana
schedule November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes! About bloody damn time! Although I must say, I find it very interesting that he chose to merge with Geta-Boshi first. Very interesting indeed. Looking forward to seeing how his new understanding that he is both Mizuno and Urahara will affect things with not only Ichigo, but everyone else as well.
person Irana
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
When the kiss finally ended blue eyes slid open and met with hers filled with the languid contentment of a sated cat. That is a beautifully seductive image. Very appealing, and very him, I think.

Ryuuken snorted softly. "You wouldn't believe me if I told you," he told her, the words purred into her ear as the credits began rolling. Oh I would. I absolutely would. Nothing about those three would surprise me.

Sorry I'm not more effusive... been one hell of a rough week.
person Darkephoenix
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'll throw my shoe at Bya if it means I get to snuggle up watching Abbot and Costello with Ryuuken later. For some odd reason I have the impression that Ryuuken has quite the collection of old comedies. Gods, I do truly love both the Quincy bastards. Thank you for this chapter, I needed it today.
person Darkephoenix
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Have I mentioned how much I utterly adore Ryuuken? Hehehe. Bya-chan will think handling Aizen is a cakewalk after this one. Excellent work.
person Irana
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*grins* I'll lock it up in a safe place once I getit... no more wandering muse.

That whole scene with Kisuke and Ryuuken playing cards was adorable. I love that their whole entire goal is to cheat and get away with it.

She made a man feel his nakedness most distinctly with that sly smile of hers. *dies laughing* Yep, I can imagine she would.

"He'll try," purred Ryuuken smugly, his eyes bright and glittering. Well now, that makes things all the more interesting now doesn't it?
person gt
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
just read through everything and I love your story!
especially the more unusual pairings (and the way you write grimmjows cat traits *_*)
person ichkak
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey caught up again at last. Brilliant to catch up on the characters. Love the three wise men of Isshin, Ishida Pops, and Kisuke that was a fab interaction.

Thanks again.
person Darkephoenix
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Excellent work. Love you, Kat.
person Irana
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*hugs you* There you are... was beginning to get worried. You were so getting an email if I hadn't seen this just now. Might still get one yet.

Frankly, he was beginning to wonder if there was anything beyond Sousuke in his mad quest for power. Ah, Shunsui, hon, that would be a resounding NO.

Shunsui flopped down next to him, tossing an arm around Grimmjow's shoulders and nearly laughing at the slightly baffled look on Grimmjow's face, as if he couldn't quite figure out how he had come to be sitting between them. Dear gods but I adore the way the maneuver him. That is truly a thing of beauty.

Dear lords I'm crying. Fuck. Once again, very glad I'm not writing this because the things I would do to Aizen to make him pay.
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really hate Aizen-teme with an absolute passion right now. The more I find out about how Grimm-kitty was treated the more I want to see him maimed and tortured. I hope you write a particularly nasty ending to the bastards life simply because he earned it.

Please continue. Ganbatte!!

Ryn