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for A Shadow of What Was

by katami

person Darkephoenix
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hehehehe! Can't WAIT for Uryu's screaming, hissy fit of epic and awe inspiring proportions when he gets wind of this one.
person Afrieal
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh god Kuchki Taiocho is going to have a litter of kittens... and Uryuu is going to swallow his tongue... Renji is going to laugh his tail off and Ichi is gonna just shake his head and groan.... keep up the great work good luck with the reading work and hope you put the story your writing for Y-con on the site *grin* (reaches back and thumps Rysha) yaoi fangirls we may be but she screeches loud enough to wake the neighbors baby again and i'm gonna make her write the next chapters for the story instead of just typing them in for me.


Affie and Rysha
person Samric
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I seriously love this! I can't wait for more! Though I guess it'll take a while--you updated while I was in the middle of reading it ^.^ It was kinda odd; I started with the knowledge that there were 51 chapters, but then at the end of 51, there's a "next chapter" button. Talk about good timing!
person Irana
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good point. Byakuya is far too private for any discussion of his personal life to go well.

"...apparently the junior Shinigami had certain conditioned responses to orders from Quincy - they obeyed them." Beautiful, just beautiful.

This chapter is gorgeous. I love the way the relationship with these two is developing. I couldn't help thinking back to the night Rukia drank him under the table and Isshin's reaction to it the next morning. I snorted and laughed my way through this chapter, because they are just so perfect for each other.
person Smoore
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really good... I hope you continue to update!!!
person vbruce
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gods DAMN it, Kat! Now I have to friggin' draw Bya like that. Like I don't have enough art projects as it is. Great work by the way. As always.
person acmarache
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, yes. And Grimmjow's such a good mommy too. Poor Yumichika! I understand hating Ichigo for introducing that duo though. I have two nephews (4 and 6) and when they have sugar *shudders* the world begins to end. Methinks Rukia is going to meet a certain Quincy whom she out drank. I can't wait until she and Byakuya have a little talk. *cackles evilly*
person Erin
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Huh?! You say I saw your notes, that means that one of my wild stabs in th dark, might be on to something? Yay...lol, no idea which one, or how, but ahh well!
Loved this chapter, these two are so fantastic together. I hadn't considered the pairing before reading this story, but now it just seems obvious!

Has Ichigo got over the fact that Ulquiorra killed Kisuke ( The origonal) a little, now? Or is it that he has him back, and he knows he is there, so he is just happy to see everything working out? Or is he just an awesome person?

Looking forward to the next chapter. You say that these parts might drag or something because they are little things with different charcters all at the same time, but you are definitly right, setting scenes and balls rolling is very important; a story wouldn't have the same depth otherwise! Anyway, I absoloutly love the interraction in them!
Looking forward to what happens next, thanks for writing!^_^
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*squee*

Oh man.. If you only knew how many times a day I was hitting refresh on chapter 50, wondering when the next chapter was going to be up.. Okay. maybe like once a day for like the past 3 days or so. *shifty eyes*.

And I can so see myself developing a fondness for primrose.. *halo*


*chu*
person Irana
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*grins* I find a good author or story, I rec to my friends. And love, your's is phenomenal.

And I agree with Ichigo... seeing those two together, the noble Shinigami and equally noble Arrancar, is beautiful. Ichigo should have said something like 'Congratulations'. Maybe then Byakuya would have softened some and it not been so rough a conversation.